See what you guys think of our new song Lost bond.
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Why do you change your nick more often than some people change their underware ?
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Underwear?
Anyways, I like besides the singer, the lyrics and...well yeah gather the rest 'cause TP Fest is starting and I have to perform!
Underwear?
Anyways, I like besides the singer, the lyrics and...well yeah gather the rest 'cause TP Fest is starting and I have to perform!
Stop spamming your crappy band.
What does this have to do with any general Queen information anyway?
Yes, this belongs in the Personal section. NOT the "Queen - General Discussion" forum. What it says on the tin...
Now, there's some good stuff in there, but there's also a fair amount of bad. The singer mostly. But overall, it sounds like a cheap demo. Needs help. I'd totally change the piano/string patch to separate pieces. Build a proper strings part on its own. I'd also change the key or at least have your singer move higher up at certain points in the song. It needs that variation to make it better. I might also change some of the guitar arrangements.
But hey, it just needs more work. Believe it or not, I think it could be a great tune.
Dum dum DUMMM!
Adam.
Now, there's some good stuff in there, but there's also a fair amount of bad. The singer mostly. But overall, it sounds like a cheap demo. Needs help. I'd totally change the piano/string patch to separate pieces. Build a proper strings part on its own. I'd also change the key or at least have your singer move higher up at certain points in the song. It needs that variation to make it better. I might also change some of the guitar arrangements.
But hey, it just needs more work. Believe it or not, I think it could be a great tune.
Dum dum DUMMM!
Adam.
Well, since Treasure Moment is the only band on this planet that comes close to the quality of Queen in terms of song-writing skills as well as musicianship, I think this is indeed the right place to post this topic. Although, the serious discussion would be a candidate as well.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: [/QUOTENAME]See what you guys think of our new song Lost bond.
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I think it can stay lost.
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I think it can stay lost.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Zebonka12 wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: [/QUOTENAME]See what you guys think of our new song Lost bond.
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I think it can stay lost.[/QUOTE]
lol
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I think it can stay lost.[/QUOTE]
lol
With all honesty, which is what I trust you desire, I was literally bored within the first 20 seconds of the song. When Johan, your vocalist, came in I was like "alright, let's see what this chap has got to offer," however I was bored once more. Your music all sounds the same to me, the same textures over and over again. Don't get me wrong, you guys are searching for emotional music, well you've got that going for you. Otherwise you've got some work ahead of you. You need to build yourselves up to more creative composers and come up with some new ideas that will keep the listener attracted to your music.
He means take some lessons and find yourselves a songwriter.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Adam Baboolal wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Yes, this belongs in the Personal section. NOT the "Queen - General Discussion" forum. What it says on the tin...
Now, there's some good stuff in there, but there's also a fair amount of bad. The singer mostly. But overall, it sounds like a cheap demo. Needs help. I'd totally change the piano/string patch to separate pieces. Build a proper strings part on its own. I'd also change the key or at least have your singer move higher up at certain points in the song. It needs that variation to make it better. I might also change some of the guitar arrangements.
But hey, it just needs more work. Believe it or not, I think it could be a great tune.
Dum dum DUMMM!
Adam.[/QUOTE]
So basically, what you're saying is: "Keep the chord progression, and some of the intervals of the melody", but change key, arrangements, singer, instrumentation...
How can you say that AND state you think it could be a great tune? That's like saying minutes of triplets going "C-D-Eb Eb-D-C" resemble "Oh When The Saints" (note that the latter uses a MAJOR third and not a minor on the opening section).
Now, there's some good stuff in there, but there's also a fair amount of bad. The singer mostly. But overall, it sounds like a cheap demo. Needs help. I'd totally change the piano/string patch to separate pieces. Build a proper strings part on its own. I'd also change the key or at least have your singer move higher up at certain points in the song. It needs that variation to make it better. I might also change some of the guitar arrangements.
But hey, it just needs more work. Believe it or not, I think it could be a great tune.
Dum dum DUMMM!
Adam.[/QUOTE]
So basically, what you're saying is: "Keep the chord progression, and some of the intervals of the melody", but change key, arrangements, singer, instrumentation...
How can you say that AND state you think it could be a great tune? That's like saying minutes of triplets going "C-D-Eb Eb-D-C" resemble "Oh When The Saints" (note that the latter uses a MAJOR third and not a minor on the opening section).
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<b><font color = "crimson"> ThomasQuinn wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Adam Baboolal wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Yes, this belongs in the Personal section. NOT the "Queen - General Discussion" forum. What it says on the tin...
Now, there's some good stuff in there, but there's also a fair amount of bad. The singer mostly. But overall, it sounds like a cheap demo. Needs help. I'd totally change the piano/string patch to separate pieces. Build a proper strings part on its own. I'd also change the key or at least have your singer move higher up at certain points in the song. It needs that variation to make it better. I might also change some of the guitar arrangements.
But hey, it just needs more work. Believe it or not, I think it could be a great tune.
Dum dum DUMMM!
Adam.[/QUOTE]
So basically, what you're saying is: "Keep the chord progression, and some of the intervals of the melody", but change key, arrangements, singer, instrumentation...
How can you say that AND state you think it could be a great tune? That's like saying minutes of triplets going "C-D-Eb Eb-D-C" resemble "Oh When The Saints" (note that the latter uses a MAJOR third and not a minor on the opening section).[/QUOTE]
LOL! Thomas, I see your point, but I do understand where Adam is coming from.
I haven't listened to the song, so I can't comment on it.
Now, there's some good stuff in there, but there's also a fair amount of bad. The singer mostly. But overall, it sounds like a cheap demo. Needs help. I'd totally change the piano/string patch to separate pieces. Build a proper strings part on its own. I'd also change the key or at least have your singer move higher up at certain points in the song. It needs that variation to make it better. I might also change some of the guitar arrangements.
But hey, it just needs more work. Believe it or not, I think it could be a great tune.
Dum dum DUMMM!
Adam.[/QUOTE]
So basically, what you're saying is: "Keep the chord progression, and some of the intervals of the melody", but change key, arrangements, singer, instrumentation...
How can you say that AND state you think it could be a great tune? That's like saying minutes of triplets going "C-D-Eb Eb-D-C" resemble "Oh When The Saints" (note that the latter uses a MAJOR third and not a minor on the opening section).[/QUOTE]
LOL! Thomas, I see your point, but I do understand where Adam is coming from.
I haven't listened to the song, so I can't comment on it.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]pittrek wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Why do you change your nick more often than some people change their underware ?[/QUOTE]
i didnt, that wasnt me
i didnt, that wasnt me
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Micrówave wrote: [/QUOTENAME]He means take some lessons and find yourselves a songwriter.[/QUOTE]
dont need to since we crush all the crappy bands out there by far but thanks for the advice :)
dont need to since we crush all the crappy bands out there by far but thanks for the advice :)