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I must admit that this is certainly one of your better demos! Great atmosphere to it, yet as I've said in previous posts it would be nice to hear you guys go for something different. The concept of the song is dark and depressing, so I kind of like that! As for the vocals that will come in time. You guys are still improving so don't give up. Congratulations on a good demo! Now, how about that finished recording? I'm looking forward to it.

For future reference and respect to your fellow Queenzoners you should post these threads in the personal section.
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[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Treasure Moment wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME].*.Messenger: Jake Pyndle.*. wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I just wrote a new instrumental which would blow those guys off the planet.

And I can sing better than them!

LoL[/QUOTE]

alright, let me listen to it.[/QUOTE]

I'll sell you my album for $14.99 (has 16 tracks)...
"Please buy my upcoming album... I need the money"
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=FF9900>Mr Mercury</font> wrote: [/QUOTENAME]The singing on this demo is rubbish to be honest, which is a pity because the song itself sounded like a good idea.

Maybe you should look at getting in someone who can sing to do your stuff justice.[/QUOTE]



Ya im not a real singer, im just the writer/piano guy. I just recorded the vocals real quick without puttin much effort to make it sound good and its not compressed. But im not the singer so hopefully it will get better with our singer on it.

But its great that some of you guys like the song!
http://www.youtube.com/user/Tranqvillia
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Wiley wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Treasure Moment wrote: [/QUOTENAME]
it wasnt me who posted this in the beginning, my brother and i are very different [/QUOTE]

Yes, your brother is not that much of an asshole like you, hehe :).

The song is quite good. I enjoyed it a lot. Not too keen on the vocals still but the song is nice. I could see it in an edited version on MTV, sung by Evanescence or someone like that.

Have you considered having a female lead vocalist? or at least someone that can actually sing very good. Your voices are good for demos but not enough for a commercial record, I think.

Wiley[/QUOTE]

I wouldnt want to edit the song , i think its good the way it is. Even if it was edited , i wouldnt think MTV would play this kind of deep depressing music. ( they did 80s-mid 90s) But now its all about shallow tunes that last 3.30 min.

Its part of making everyone become less emotional and more robotic.
http://www.youtube.com/user/Tranqvillia
I liked it. Nice job
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Wiley wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Treasure Moment wrote: [/QUOTENAME]
it wasnt me who posted this in the beginning, my brother and i are very different [/QUOTE]

Yes, your brother is not that much of an asshole like you, hehe :).

The song is quite good. I enjoyed it a lot. Not too keen on the vocals still but the song is nice. I could see it in an edited version on MTV, sung by Evanescence or someone like that.

Have you considered having a female lead vocalist? or at least someone that can actually sing very good. Your voices are good for demos but not enough for a commercial record, I think.

Wiley[/QUOTE]

I wouldnt want to edit the song , i think its good the way it is. Even if it was edited , i wouldnt think MTV would play this kind of deep depressing music. ( they did 80s-mid 90s) But now its all about shallow tunes that last 3.30 min.

Its part of making everyone become less emotional and more robotic.[/QUOTE]

I didn't find the song depressing. In fact, why the fuck would you call it that?
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Can you stop posting this stuff in this section.

Read the board outline and post in the correct forum.
"It is better to sit in silence and have people think you're a fool, then to open your mouth and remove all doubt"
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME].*.Messenger: Jake Pyndle.*. wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Wiley wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Treasure Moment wrote: [/QUOTENAME]
it wasnt me who posted this in the beginning, my brother and i are very different [/QUOTE]

Yes, your brother is not that much of an asshole like you, hehe :).

The song is quite good. I enjoyed it a lot. Not too keen on the vocals still but the song is nice. I could see it in an edited version on MTV, sung by Evanescence or someone like that.

Have you considered having a female lead vocalist? or at least someone that can actually sing very good. Your voices are good for demos but not enough for a commercial record, I think.

Wiley[/QUOTE]

I wouldnt want to edit the song , i think its good the way it is. Even if it was edited , i wouldnt think MTV would play this kind of deep depressing music. ( they did 80s-mid 90s) But now its all about shallow tunes that last 3.30 min.

Its part of making everyone become less emotional and more robotic.[/QUOTE]

I didn't find the song depressing. In fact, why the fuck would you call it that?[/QUOTE]

Well its certainly not a happy song. I think its kind of deppression in the song, a dark mood.
http://www.youtube.com/user/Tranqvillia
Which ever one of you posted it (I care not) why oh why do you persist in doing this?

Can either of you grasp the simple concept of forums for different sections of a website? seems not

Can you both stop posting this rubbish in any other section than the correct one.
"It is better to sit in silence and have people think you're a fool, then to open your mouth and remove all doubt"
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Togg wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Which ever one of you posted it (I care not) why oh why do you persist in doing this?

Can either of you grasp the simple concept of forums for different sections of a website? seems not

Can you both stop posting this rubbish in any other section than the correct one.


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the only thing rubbish here is YOU. If you dont like it dont click on this thread stupid fool!
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Having spent the last 25 years in music/media industry I can safely say that you will never get signed, so you might as well enjoy the flak on Queenzone, because frankly here is the only place your music will ever get heard.
"It is better to sit in silence and have people think you're a fool, then to open your mouth and remove all doubt"
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Togg wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Having spent the last 25 years in music/media industry I can safely say that you will never get signed, so you might as well enjoy the flak on Queenzone, because frankly here is the only place your music will ever get heard.[/QUOTE]

yeah whatever, spend 25 years more, if you dont know what good music is it doesnt matter if you spend 100 years in it. Your words mean nothing to me because you know nothing.
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[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Treasure Moment wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Togg wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Having spent the last 25 years in music/media industry I can safely say that you will never get signed, so you might as well enjoy the flak on Queenzone, because frankly here is the only place your music will ever get heard.[/QUOTE]

yeah whatever, spend 25 years more, if you dont know what good music is it doesnt matter if you spend 100 years in it. Your words mean nothing to me because you know nothing.[/QUOTE]

Hilarious, really.
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[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Sir GH<br><h6>ah yeah</h6> wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Treasure Moment wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Togg wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Having spent the last 25 years in music/media industry I can safely say that you will never get signed, so you might as well enjoy the flak on Queenzone, because frankly here is the only place your music will ever get heard.[/QUOTE]

yeah whatever, spend 25 years more, if you dont know what good music is it doesnt matter if you spend 100 years in it. Your words mean nothing to me because you know nothing.[/QUOTE]

Hilarious, really.
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Indeed. You could have a PhD and he'd still say you know nothing.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Treasure Moment wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Togg wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Having spent the last 25 years in music/media industry I can safely say that you will never get signed, so you might as well enjoy the flak on Queenzone, because frankly here is the only place your music will ever get heard.[/QUOTE]

yeah whatever, spend 25 years more, if you dont know what good music is it doesnt matter if you spend 100 years in it. Your words mean nothing to me because you know nothing.[/QUOTE]


You sound like one of those idiots on American Idol who get bad critism and lash out at Simon Cowell and say 'I don't care what you say i can sing' Maybe you can perform a cover od she bangs? Why not take the critism from people who have been there and done that and just use that to get better instead of talking childish shit? Your attitude alone will prevent you from EVER getting a deal, it's possible to get a deal from your music, obviously because anyone can get a deal, and btw you talk your flack about these newer bands and you guys are so supreme to them?! NOT! I will tell you that you sound like any other band on MTV/VH1 with the exception that they can sing, and they don't use gay ass Europe theme's, oh yeah, they have a recording deal and sell millions. Hmm, convinced yet?

Honestly it is YOU the little mouth who doesn't know music, i will tell you that right now, i have been playing guitar for 20 years, and piano for 22 years, and have had some success in the biz, and i will tell you right now, it is your attitude that will prevent you from getting signed. I am recording an album that will be released early next year btw, but i guess it is shit because you don't think anyone is good except yourself?
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