Tomorrow it's one of my friends birthdays!!!!
Gonna celebrate it in STYYYYYLE. [img=/images/smiley/msn/devil_smile.gif][/img] [/QUOTE]
its_a_hard_life 26994
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Yara
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[b]Sergei. wrote: [/b]
Shame on me. I get nervous too easily.
I just posted a bit of my writing for review on a site and my hands are trembling ferociously. D:<
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I wish you the best. Well, it's not shame on you - the very fact you submitted the article is witness to your willingness and courage to get your writting across. It's already an important step - the fact you're willing to submit the writing for people without having any control over how they will review it is a good sign, I think - he who begins is half-way to his goals.
The worst scenario is just...a bad review. That doesn't mean your writing isn't good and, besides, a bad review, in worst case scenario, may be a great opportunity for you to learn and see what and where you can improve with regard to writing.
I hope it all works just fine!
[b]Sergei. wrote: [/b]
Shame on me. I get nervous too easily.
I just posted a bit of my writing for review on a site and my hands are trembling ferociously. D:<
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I wish you the best. Well, it's not shame on you - the very fact you submitted the article is witness to your willingness and courage to get your writting across. It's already an important step - the fact you're willing to submit the writing for people without having any control over how they will review it is a good sign, I think - he who begins is half-way to his goals.
The worst scenario is just...a bad review. That doesn't mean your writing isn't good and, besides, a bad review, in worst case scenario, may be a great opportunity for you to learn and see what and where you can improve with regard to writing.
I hope it all works just fine!
Winter Land Man
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[b]Yara wrote: [/b]
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[b]Sergei. wrote: [/b]
Shame on me. I get nervous too easily.
I just posted a bit of my writing for review on a site and my hands are trembling ferociously. D:<
[/QUOTE]
I wish you the best. Well, it's not shame on you - the very fact you submitted the article is witness to your willingness and courage to get your writting across. It's already an important step - the fact you're willing to submit the writing for people without having any control over how they will review it is a good sign, I think - he who begins is half-way to his goals.
The worst scenario is just...a bad review. That doesn't mean your writing isn't good and, besides, a bad review, in worst case scenario, may be a great opportunity for you to learn and see what and where you can improve with regard to writing.
I hope it all works just fine!
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Yeah, Yara is correct. Who cares if they give a bad review. Rolling Stone and a ton of magazines ALWAYS gave Queen bad reviews until the day Freddie died. So if anyone gives you a bad review, just tell them to fuck off.
[b]Yara wrote: [/b]
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[b]Sergei. wrote: [/b]
Shame on me. I get nervous too easily.
I just posted a bit of my writing for review on a site and my hands are trembling ferociously. D:<
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I wish you the best. Well, it's not shame on you - the very fact you submitted the article is witness to your willingness and courage to get your writting across. It's already an important step - the fact you're willing to submit the writing for people without having any control over how they will review it is a good sign, I think - he who begins is half-way to his goals.
The worst scenario is just...a bad review. That doesn't mean your writing isn't good and, besides, a bad review, in worst case scenario, may be a great opportunity for you to learn and see what and where you can improve with regard to writing.
I hope it all works just fine!
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Yeah, Yara is correct. Who cares if they give a bad review. Rolling Stone and a ton of magazines ALWAYS gave Queen bad reviews until the day Freddie died. So if anyone gives you a bad review, just tell them to fuck off.
Sergei.
@Yara:
It's actually fiction text, but yeah... the worry about "Will I get a bad review or a good review" is just half the problem. It's also that there's nowhere to go where I can get a lot of good, seriously critiquing viewpoints on work. I have a DeviantArt account but I hardly ever use it, Greatwriting.co.uk is sometimes good, but not really. Yahoo Answers can be really good because you're being reviewed by the most random people out there who have no earthly clue who you are, but it can sometimes be rubbish because what time you post the query is everything -- post it one minute and you can get five or six good reviews, post it another and it gets bumped down to the bottom of the list within five minutes and you have 0 replies (yet there are twenty Twilight questions asked after yours that get thirty responses each). It's like sometimes you're forced to keep your work to yourself and have no idea how someone on the outside thinks of it. Which can be frustrating.
It's actually fiction text, but yeah... the worry about "Will I get a bad review or a good review" is just half the problem. It's also that there's nowhere to go where I can get a lot of good, seriously critiquing viewpoints on work. I have a DeviantArt account but I hardly ever use it, Greatwriting.co.uk is sometimes good, but not really. Yahoo Answers can be really good because you're being reviewed by the most random people out there who have no earthly clue who you are, but it can sometimes be rubbish because what time you post the query is everything -- post it one minute and you can get five or six good reviews, post it another and it gets bumped down to the bottom of the list within five minutes and you have 0 replies (yet there are twenty Twilight questions asked after yours that get thirty responses each). It's like sometimes you're forced to keep your work to yourself and have no idea how someone on the outside thinks of it. Which can be frustrating.
its_a_hard_life 26994
[b] ELLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA IS BACK EVERYONEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
She's back to haunt you bitchs. SHE'S OUT TO... Get back in the zone with Queenzone? lols.
I wonder who'll remember her here... XD [/b]
She's back to haunt you bitchs. SHE'S OUT TO... Get back in the zone with Queenzone? lols.
I wonder who'll remember her here... XD [/b]
Ella! Formerly known as the Metal Maiden
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[b]its_a_hard_life wrote: [/b]
[b]ELLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA IS BACK EVERYONEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
She's back to haunt you bitchs. SHE'S OUT TO... Get back in the zone with Queenzone? lols.
I wonder who'll remember her here... XD
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jessie remembered about me!
[b]its_a_hard_life wrote: [/b]
[b]ELLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA IS BACK EVERYONEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
She's back to haunt you bitchs. SHE'S OUT TO... Get back in the zone with Queenzone? lols.
I wonder who'll remember her here... XD
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jessie remembered about me!
Winter Land Man
Come here my sweet,
Let me help you with that,
There... that's better.
Let me help you with that,
There... that's better.
its_a_hard_life 26994
"Can you give me sanctuary, I must find a place to hide, a place for me to hide. Can you find me soft asylum, I cant make it anymore, the man is at the door."
Winter Land Man
I was sittin' in a crummy movie with my hands on my chin,
Oh the violence that occurs, seems like we never win...
Love and Mercy, that's what you need tonight,
So, Love and Mercy to you and your friends tonight.
Oh the violence that occurs, seems like we never win...
Love and Mercy, that's what you need tonight,
So, Love and Mercy to you and your friends tonight.
-fatty- 2850
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[b]Mr. Britt wrote: [/b]
I was sittin' in a crummy movie with my hands on my chin,
Oh the violence that occurs, seems like we never win...
Love and Mercy, that's what you need tonight,
So, Love and Mercy to you and your friends tonight.
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You'd need pretty big hands to cradle that massive fucking chin of yours.
fatty.
[b]Mr. Britt wrote: [/b]
I was sittin' in a crummy movie with my hands on my chin,
Oh the violence that occurs, seems like we never win...
Love and Mercy, that's what you need tonight,
So, Love and Mercy to you and your friends tonight.
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You'd need pretty big hands to cradle that massive fucking chin of yours.
fatty.
Winter Land Man
Let's go to Heaven in my car,
I wanna drive you there tonight,
Let's go to Heaven in my car,
We won't be stoppin' for red lights...
I wanna drive you there tonight,
Let's go to Heaven in my car,
We won't be stoppin' for red lights...
-fatty- 2850
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[b]Mr. Britt wrote: [/b]
Let's go to Heaven in my car,
I wanna drive you there tonight,
Let's go to Heaven in my car,
We won't be stoppin' for red lights...
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She can't hear you Jake. She's tied up in the trunk of your car.
[b]Mr. Britt wrote: [/b]
Let's go to Heaven in my car,
I wanna drive you there tonight,
Let's go to Heaven in my car,
We won't be stoppin' for red lights...
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She can't hear you Jake. She's tied up in the trunk of your car.
Winter Land Man
I just bought my 2nd iced coffee of the night. Ohhhhhh, iced coffee tastes so good. It's rotting my teeth out!
Winter Land Man
[b]SOMEONE ELSE'S KISS[/b]
It's just another day while you're out there having a fun time
While I'm thinking of you in this cold room of mine
Life isn't roses they say as everything goes wrong
Life leads to death yet you expect me to carry on
Beautiful dreams, sad reality
Is this the way life should be?
[i]Baby, I don't know what to do now
I'm lost without you now[/i]
I'm thinking about the time when you were my wife
While you're out there making love to the man of your life
And each and every dreadful day
I just wish I could step to the edge and fly away
Magnificent dreams, sad reality
Everything is wrong with me
[i]
Baby I don't know what to do now
I can't smile now
All I can do is lay here and wait to die because it's only you I miss
While you've forgotten about me with someone else's kiss[/i]
I'm being controlled by my prescribed pills
I don't want to be controlled yet they force the refills
They say it'll help me forget that you're moving on
But I fall asleep and wake up and I still know that you're gone
Beautiful dreams, sad reality
Nothing's the way it should be
[i]Baby I don't know what to do now
I can't smile now
All I can do is lay here and wait to die because it's only you I miss
While you've forgotten about me with someone else's kiss[/i]
You loved me - You fucked me
You controlled me - You used me
You cheated me - You fooled me
Beautiful dreams, sad reality
Life is never the way we hope that it'll be
[i]
Baby I don't know what to do now
I can't smile now
All I can do is lay here and wait to die because it's only you I miss
While you've forgotten about me with someone else's kiss[/i]
[i] No, I don't know what to do now
I can't smile now
All I can do is lay here and wait to die because it's only you I miss
While you've forgotten about me with someone else's kiss
Oh, I don't know what to do now
I can't go on now
All I can do is lay here and wait to die because it's only you I miss
While you've forgotten about me, you've forgotten about me
With someone else's - with someone else's kiss[/i]
It's just another day while you're out there having a fun time
While I'm thinking of you in this cold room of mine
Life isn't roses they say as everything goes wrong
Life leads to death yet you expect me to carry on
Beautiful dreams, sad reality
Is this the way life should be?
[i]Baby, I don't know what to do now
I'm lost without you now[/i]
I'm thinking about the time when you were my wife
While you're out there making love to the man of your life
And each and every dreadful day
I just wish I could step to the edge and fly away
Magnificent dreams, sad reality
Everything is wrong with me
[i]
Baby I don't know what to do now
I can't smile now
All I can do is lay here and wait to die because it's only you I miss
While you've forgotten about me with someone else's kiss[/i]
I'm being controlled by my prescribed pills
I don't want to be controlled yet they force the refills
They say it'll help me forget that you're moving on
But I fall asleep and wake up and I still know that you're gone
Beautiful dreams, sad reality
Nothing's the way it should be
[i]Baby I don't know what to do now
I can't smile now
All I can do is lay here and wait to die because it's only you I miss
While you've forgotten about me with someone else's kiss[/i]
You loved me - You fucked me
You controlled me - You used me
You cheated me - You fooled me
Beautiful dreams, sad reality
Life is never the way we hope that it'll be
[i]
Baby I don't know what to do now
I can't smile now
All I can do is lay here and wait to die because it's only you I miss
While you've forgotten about me with someone else's kiss[/i]
[i] No, I don't know what to do now
I can't smile now
All I can do is lay here and wait to die because it's only you I miss
While you've forgotten about me with someone else's kiss
Oh, I don't know what to do now
I can't go on now
All I can do is lay here and wait to die because it's only you I miss
While you've forgotten about me, you've forgotten about me
With someone else's - with someone else's kiss[/i]
Winter Land Man
I was outside smoking and some stray cat kept following me and bothering me, and it looked kind of hungry. So I went to my parents apartment and let the cat in and then left. Wait until they see the cat when they wake up in the morning! LoL!!!