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Another Roger (re) · Member since
I have made some songs lately.  And it would nice to hear some thoughts from you on the forum.  I am fine with constructive criticism :)

And if someone can help me with drum or bass be in touch ;) 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QL_hx8mYOBE
Basically blind em and deaf em in the first 10 minutes, and while they are recovering from that put in the less good songs
Another Roger (re) · Member since
I didnt manage to make that link work, so you need to copy it and paste it in the browser. Unless someone can fix it for me.
Basically blind em and deaf em in the first 10 minutes, and while they are recovering from that put in the less good songs
Mr Mercury · Member since
Heres a working link for you -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?gl=GB&v=QL_hx8mYOBE

For the most part I thought it was actually ok. The harmony's near the end sounded a bit "Queen-esque", well Queen 2 era at least to me. The sound itself could do with a bit more fleshing out and , as you have probably already realised yourself, backed up with a bit of bass and drums.

Good effort imo...
"Normally i can't dance to save my life. But as soon as I step in dog shit, I can moonwalk better than Michael Jackson."
Dan C. · Member since
It feels kind of Beatles-y to me. I dig it!
"The tri-tone is the Devil's interval, and he demands resolution." - Richard Lloyd
GratefulFan · Member since
DanCorson wrote: It feels kind of Beatles-y to me. I dig it!
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You know what it triggered for me?  Very early Pink Floyd/Syd Barrett.  Especially Barrett.
Another Roger (re) · Member since
"Mr Mercury wrote: Heres a working link for you -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?gl=GB&v=QL_hx8mYOBE

For the most part I thought it was actually ok. The harmony's near the end sounded a bit "Queen-esque", well Queen 2 era at least to me. The sound itself could do with a bit more fleshing out and , as you have probably already realised yourself, backed up with a bit of bass and drums.

 Good effort imo..."  

Thanks for the nice feedback. And yes. I do agree with you that a lot lacks in there. I am quite limitied when it comes to play instruments so thats why drums and bass lack atm. I can play guitar and a little piano. So I am now getting some help from a kind person from the queenforum. :)

And thanks for linking for me :)
Basically blind em and deaf em in the first 10 minutes, and while they are recovering from that put in the less good songs
Another Roger (re) · Member since
DanCorson wrote: It feels kind of Beatles-y to me. I dig it!

Oh wait. I am not in that league. But I take it as a compliment. :)
Basically blind em and deaf em in the first 10 minutes, and while they are recovering from that put in the less good songs
Another Roger (re) · Member since
Weeman from the forum has added drums and bass now. He is very good and has lifted the song to heights I couldn't have achieved without him ;)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hN2Q3XYAVy4