Somebody to love cover by me

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[b]tomchristie22 wrote: [/b] Surprised I haven't heard this until now. Of course, only positive feedback is valid and 'honest', so I won't comment. I think the fact that only one other person has had something good to say about your cover speaks for itself.[/QUOTE]
And even then, the other poster that had SOMETHING positive to say even still at the same time acknowledged it was far from perfect and there were certainly some faults in TM's vocal performance.

Offcourse there are faults but not to the extent you guys say , that's the point. And I will do a re- take to prove that I can do better

Well I'm glad you agree that there are faults here, but earlier you were claiming that it was identical to Mercury's...

I meant that it couldn't be out of tune that much cause it blended well with freddies, i made a new version here.

[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zdsmxBARTf4]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zdsmxBARTf4[/url]

It's better, but you're still pitchy here and there.

Once again..

Try covering songs that are EASIER to sing. You don't get better by doing things that are beyond you. And that's not an insult. Queen songs are beyond most singers.

Learning is a forward progression. You don't suddenly become a chef by working at a fancy restaurant. First you become a chef, and then you get the job.

Do you think the first song I learned on guitar was Brighton Rock? Or maybe something easier like Greensleeves?

[b]Mercury SingerOfLife[/b]

Glad to see you've finally somehow started agreeing with people's critique, which is a good mark.
If you'd been agreeing back then, you wouldn't have received so many bad comments.

[QUOTE] [b]Mercury SingerOfLife wrote:[/b]
I meant that it couldn't be out of tune that much cause it blended well with freddies, i made a new version here.[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zdsmxBARTf4]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zdsmxBARTf4[/url][/QUOTE]
the only thing that you and Freddie genuinely have in common is the headline : "Is This Man A Prat?"
in freddie's case it was the 70s music press having a pop, in your case - sadly, the jury is still out

Ha, it's actually a bit better now. Just don't act surprised when people crucify you, because the original is pretty well untouchable you know.

Wizard: Offcourse you are right, one have to start from the begining and work to the top BUT im not claiming that im a super singer by any means, i just think its quite good for a guy who has not been singing much.

Another thing is also, i find it hard to find the right frequencies for the vocals, so it sounds natural cause right now , it sounds to thin and stuff, especially when i hit high notes and that bugs me. Im a true beginner on everything regardin recording vocals.

Zeb: Haha yea i know , the original can't be beat and im not trying either hah

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[b]Mercury SingerOfLife wrote: [/b] I meant that it couldn't be out of tune that much cause it blended well with freddies, i made a new version here.

[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zdsmxBARTf4]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zdsmxBARTf4[/url][/QUOTE]
An improvement, for sure! Nice to see you practiced some restraint, makes a huge difference, although as already noted there are still a few pitch issues remaining, especially from 1:32~1:44 and a spectacular vocal crack at 2:10.

Inu: Thank you! I don't know if it was a vocal crack at 2.10 but it is quite annoying that the vocals sounds thin though. It has to do with frequencies that has to get right Maybe too much high frequency or something.

Yea i have to practice to get control over my voice so it gets more relaxed, to be more even and not so intense i think. But im sure it will come with time and practice though.

Would like to try another queen song

I don't think frequencies is the right term you're looking for. I think technique is more the proper term here in that context.

If you're new to singing, it will take time for your vocal range to expand (so long as you don't abuse it by intentionally trying to go out of your established range or over straining it!) and for you to discover ways to improve on your vocal technique. I have to actually credit Gregsynth for helping me realize how to better my personal technique and focus much better on pitch, although I'm far from being absolutely perfect either!

Freddie didn't become the singer he was better known to be overnight either! Ibex 1969, enough said :-)

I think it's a bit of both, both technique and frequency cause depending on what you set it, it can really alter your voice. Like when i sing without a microphone, it sounds more full and not so thin if you get what mean.

Oh so you sing too? What do you sing?

Haha yea i heard the Ibex songs justnow and yea... thats certainly not the Freddie we saw later on so yeah, he learned his way to be the best for sure!

[QUOTE] [b]Mercury SingerOfLife wrote:[/b]
Would like to try another queen song[/QUOTE]
don't.
try something less demanding. get that right, and work your way up...
best advice, steer clear of any singer who sings both ends of a range....Freddie, Dio etc

nah i like singing to queen and i think it helps to sing queen songs cause they are so above other songs in terms of singing, so i think one benifits from singing freddie songs , how bad it may sound.