sorry dude, it sucks!
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_Amadeus_: I don't wish to be a bastard or anything, but I think you might be better off if you stick to music. I mean, if you use rhyme, that's ok, even though it's not usually employed by the great poets, save those of the 18th/19th century, but if you do, you should use it correctly and have a certain structure about it.
Furthermore, you should really mind your rhythm. If there's one thing that ruins this thing, it's the rhythm, which is absolutely apalling. It's like playing Debussey's 'Clair De Lune' (which I'm sure you played; please don't confuse this classical work with the simple nursery-rhyme-like 'Au Clair De La Lune') with a flagrant disregard for the time-signature, playing the notes at random lengths and having bars of random length.
Abridged version: It's crap.
LMAO
Radi edit: Crap
Thank you for mention my name in your poem!
Erin is a normal member,
Which is hard to say about most people on here,
Hmm..I better start shaking things up a bit then..
Erm..this is a little disturbing.
Dear amadeus,
please DO NOT go into the greeting card business.
:D
please DO NOT go into the greeting card business.
:D
Lol.
I should have said this at the beginning; I did not mean to offend anybody, and the majority of the poem is ofcourse untrue :)
Victoria, you said I wrote a rude poem. I know I can't really disagree with ya, but all the rudeness was obviously untrue (now do ya really think Marial looks like a lizzard?).
And ya all really couldn't have expected the poem to be good, and I really didn't care for it to be. It was typed in like 5 minutes or so.
Miracly, whats wrong with singin'? :D Not sure what way ya meant, but I wasn't tryin' to be mean or anything :).
(I'm male by the way, see profile ;)
I agree with you somewhat Thomas. The main reason I wrote this poem having ryhtems/poetry was because it's somewhat more interesting to read. I had to compromise a lot though, which is the bad thing about that, because I couldn't think of anything else Lord of Darkness could play with besides dolls... heh.
I'm not plannin' on bein' anything 'big' in the poetry world, as such the music world, but Debussey IS 'big' in the classical music world. What makes him 'big' is that he has his own 'style' and 'ryhtem', such as I did. Ofcourse, if I had really wanted it to be somewhat good, I would have spent a lot more time on it :)
I agree with ya Fairy Queen :)
Sry about that Marial (the lizzard thing), didn't want to offend anyone, just could find anything that rhymes with 'Buzzard'.
Welcome Serry :D
I was bein' nice Erin :D
Why is it disturbin' KillerQueen840? I wasn't tryin' to offend anyone. I know that ya have every right to be disturbed, but ya know I'm just jokin' about this whole KillerQueen/KillerKing/Amadeus thing :).
Hard Rocker, trust me, I won't :D
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Hope that clears a bit up :)
I should have said this at the beginning; I did not mean to offend anybody, and the majority of the poem is ofcourse untrue :)
Victoria, you said I wrote a rude poem. I know I can't really disagree with ya, but all the rudeness was obviously untrue (now do ya really think Marial looks like a lizzard?).
And ya all really couldn't have expected the poem to be good, and I really didn't care for it to be. It was typed in like 5 minutes or so.
Miracly, whats wrong with singin'? :D Not sure what way ya meant, but I wasn't tryin' to be mean or anything :).
(I'm male by the way, see profile ;)
I agree with you somewhat Thomas. The main reason I wrote this poem having ryhtems/poetry was because it's somewhat more interesting to read. I had to compromise a lot though, which is the bad thing about that, because I couldn't think of anything else Lord of Darkness could play with besides dolls... heh.
I'm not plannin' on bein' anything 'big' in the poetry world, as such the music world, but Debussey IS 'big' in the classical music world. What makes him 'big' is that he has his own 'style' and 'ryhtem', such as I did. Ofcourse, if I had really wanted it to be somewhat good, I would have spent a lot more time on it :)
I agree with ya Fairy Queen :)
Sry about that Marial (the lizzard thing), didn't want to offend anyone, just could find anything that rhymes with 'Buzzard'.
Welcome Serry :D
I was bein' nice Erin :D
Why is it disturbin' KillerQueen840? I wasn't tryin' to offend anyone. I know that ya have every right to be disturbed, but ya know I'm just jokin' about this whole KillerQueen/KillerKing/Amadeus thing :).
Hard Rocker, trust me, I won't :D
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Hope that clears a bit up :)
Lol, I know you're joking but you did seem pretty mean to most of these people. And, I dunno, if I were you I would be pretty embarrassed after writing such things. ;-)
But, I suppose it's a little better now that you cleared some of this stuff up. But just cos people go about teasing you, (no matter how hard it is) it doesn't mean you should go back and tease them.
I don't really understand why so many people don't like you, but maybe if you changed your act a little bit they might start to grow more fond of you. I think you're fine but don't try to get back at them or anything. I think things will eventually turn around.
Hmmm..I forgot where I was going with this..oh well. I'm going to go out for a bit and play a lil volley ball. Seeee ya.
But, I suppose it's a little better now that you cleared some of this stuff up. But just cos people go about teasing you, (no matter how hard it is) it doesn't mean you should go back and tease them.
I don't really understand why so many people don't like you, but maybe if you changed your act a little bit they might start to grow more fond of you. I think you're fine but don't try to get back at them or anything. I think things will eventually turn around.
Hmmm..I forgot where I was going with this..oh well. I'm going to go out for a bit and play a lil volley ball. Seeee ya.
Well, I don't mind 'chagin' my act' a bit, but I, how do I say this, don't really have many intentions of getting people here at Queenzone to like me.
And no matter how much I 'changed my act', I don't really think they'd change their mind.
Never know though :)
And no matter how much I 'changed my act', I don't really think they'd change their mind.
Never know though :)
Marial is a drunken buzzard,
Ok, I'm joking, she kinda looks like a lizzard,
OMG!!! I'm ofended!!!! Change this please, I don't look like a reptile
Of course you don't !!! Just ignore it.... :)
You laugh it off. You deserve a slap in the face. But I'm not the violent type, so I can't do it. I'll just stare at you with deep malice that will melt your face off.
So your agenda is to piss us all off?
...
I don't really have many intentions of getting people here at Queenzone to like me.
So your agenda is to piss us all off?
...
You laugh it off. You deserve a slap in the face. But I'm not the violent type, so I can't do it. I'll just stare at you with deep malice that will melt your face off.
I don't really have many intentions of getting people here at Queenzone to like me.
So your agenda is to piss us all off?
...
Pretty much, ya.
Why?
Somethin' to do to pass the time :)
Marial is a drunken buzzard,
Ok, I'm joking, she kinda looks like a lizzard,
OMG!!! I'm ofended!!!! Change this please, I don't look like a reptile
Don't worry, he just fancies the arse off you and is prob having a boner right now.
Your poem is REALLY shite!!
what an attention seeker...just cos no one likes ya...
Yeah it really is SHITE...
Yours Truly
Arlene R. Weiss (the MAN!!!!, gee now I know what that hospital bill in the mail was for..reads..oh..TRANSGENDER SEX CHANGE OPERATION!)