This 1 is for me :D
N= Nicki B=Brian
Nicki and Brian are both hotel mangers. Nicki is a BIG flirt and little does she know that Brian likes her
N= I hope you enjoy your stay here with us. If you have any problems just ask for Nicki.
B= **after the guests had gone** You look like you are enjoying yourself
Nicki= **nods** yup I'm really enjoying it here, It's soooo lively!
Brian sqeezes past, brushing Nicki's arm.
B= I've got to go
N= Ok, see you later in the staff meeting.
** In the meeting room**
Hotel Owner= Right these are the schdules for the work tonight.
N= I though tonight was my night off!
B= Same!
Hotel Owner= Well it's not! Team dissmissed
N= **to Brian** What are you doing?
B= Guard duty, you know, keeping an eye open upstairs, what about you?
N= Same, I suppose we should do it together, that way we wont get lonely
B= Ok, I'll meet you upstairs
**Upstaris**
N= Right, lets get to work
Brian follows her around, every now and again checking his watch.
B= Time for us to finish
N= Yeah I'm shattered! Did you pick up 2 room keys?
B= **looks embarressed** Erm... well I've only got 1.
N= What room?
B= This 1 ** points to the nearest door**
N= ok
** Inside the room **
N= I'll sleep in here
B= No ** goes bright red ** I get lonely
N= Why didn't you say so!
Nicki grabs Brian's hand and leads him into the bedroom, but what happens?...Thats for my ears only lol
I'm REALLY embarressed!!!
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[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Queen_Rox<h6>We Will Rock You</h6> wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: [/QUOTENAME]What's up with all this dialogue stuff? It's kind of corny.
And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.[/QUOTE]
It's just a bit of fun, LadyMercury.[/QUOTE]
I see.[/QUOTE]
Well, I agree with LadyMercury... To much pain and illness :-s...
And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.[/QUOTE]
It's just a bit of fun, LadyMercury.[/QUOTE]
I see.[/QUOTE]
Well, I agree with LadyMercury... To much pain and illness :-s...
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU, I love my story thanks again, bye-bye!
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]the GIRLZ are back in town wrote: [/QUOTENAME]THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU, I love my story thanks again, bye-bye![/QUOTE]
No problem!! Glad you liked it! :-)
No problem!! Glad you liked it! :-)
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: [/QUOTENAME]What's up with all this dialogue stuff? It's kind of corny.
And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.[/QUOTE]
The beginning was good, but the rest sucked.
And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.[/QUOTE]
The beginning was good, but the rest sucked.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=&#FF0063><b>Cookies! wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: [/QUOTENAME]What's up with all this dialogue stuff? It's kind of corny.
And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.[/QUOTE]
The beginning was good, but the rest sucked.[/QUOTE]
I'm sorry to be offended, but are you saying that we're not-so-good writers?
And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.[/QUOTE]
The beginning was good, but the rest sucked.[/QUOTE]
I'm sorry to be offended, but are you saying that we're not-so-good writers?
(Me and Freddie Mercury dancing in a hot 70s nightclub)
Freddie: woo, yeah, oh ja oh ja, where be the oven mitts, this is too hot for my hands!
Me: are you talking about my arse
Freddie: yessiree fucking bob, i am, owww, that hurt
Me: sorry man, just don't touch...just..just...d-d-don't touch it. keep dancing. yeah, shake it, let me hear you say, vat?
(then we booty dance and rent a hot room at the sunset motel, YEAH)
That was just shit and more shit put into dialogue
Freddie: woo, yeah, oh ja oh ja, where be the oven mitts, this is too hot for my hands!
Me: are you talking about my arse
Freddie: yessiree fucking bob, i am, owww, that hurt
Me: sorry man, just don't touch...just..just...d-d-don't touch it. keep dancing. yeah, shake it, let me hear you say, vat?
(then we booty dance and rent a hot room at the sunset motel, YEAH)
That was just shit and more shit put into dialogue
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Queen_Rox<h6>We Will Rock You</h6> wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=&#FF0063><b>Cookies! wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: [/QUOTENAME]What's up with all this dialogue stuff? It's kind of corny.
And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.[/QUOTE]
The beginning was good, but the rest sucked.[/QUOTE]
I'm sorry to be offended, but are you saying that we're not-so-good writers?[/QUOTE]
You added on to the beginning, and so did lots of others. It was very good, just all over the place. I added onto the rest. Even my parts sucked, so no. I am not suggesting that you are not very good writers. I am not a very good writer.
And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.[/QUOTE]
The beginning was good, but the rest sucked.[/QUOTE]
I'm sorry to be offended, but are you saying that we're not-so-good writers?[/QUOTE]
You added on to the beginning, and so did lots of others. It was very good, just all over the place. I added onto the rest. Even my parts sucked, so no. I am not suggesting that you are not very good writers. I am not a very good writer.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=&#FF0063><b>Cookies! wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Queen_Rox<h6>We Will Rock You</h6> wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=&#FF0063><b>Cookies! wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=black>LadyMercury wrote: [/QUOTENAME]What's up with all this dialogue stuff? It's kind of corny.
And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.[/QUOTE]
The beginning was good, but the rest sucked.[/QUOTE]
I'm sorry to be offended, but are you saying that we're not-so-good writers?[/QUOTE]
You added on to the beginning, and so did lots of others. It was very good, just all over the place. I added onto the rest. Even my parts sucked, so no. I am not suggesting that you are not very good writers. I am not a very good writer.[/QUOTE]
Ah, thanks, Cookies. Sure you're a very good writer, too. You've just gotta keep trying and maybe your writing skills will improve.
And that last Queen story thread wasn't funny at all! Too serious.[/QUOTE]
The beginning was good, but the rest sucked.[/QUOTE]
I'm sorry to be offended, but are you saying that we're not-so-good writers?[/QUOTE]
You added on to the beginning, and so did lots of others. It was very good, just all over the place. I added onto the rest. Even my parts sucked, so no. I am not suggesting that you are not very good writers. I am not a very good writer.[/QUOTE]
Ah, thanks, Cookies. Sure you're a very good writer, too. You've just gotta keep trying and maybe your writing skills will improve.
Well, this thread went far, now didn't it?
hey! dont ditch the thread kids!!
can i have a story??
me. (emma)
and freddie.
it can be plutonic.
but there can be naughty stuff involved.
lol
that makes no sense.
ah well.
loves you.
emm xx
can i have a story??
me. (emma)
and freddie.
it can be plutonic.
but there can be naughty stuff involved.
lol
that makes no sense.
ah well.
loves you.
emm xx
Hey!! these stories are excellent im really liking them! Bohemian may-niac ur very talented!! will u do me one pretty pretty please, on with roger and brian!! please please!! lol
Leigh XxXxXx
Leigh XxXxXx
I'm going to write one for my friend amy, aka girlontheprowl.
A=amy
B=brian
Its was a gorgeous sunny day and amy took a trip to her local swimming pool, there she met a sexy lifeguard called brian...
A: Hi, er amd i early or is the pool not open yet?
B: no no dear people just dont come this time in the mornings!!
A: well i love my early morning swims!! like to keep fit!! I havnt seen you here before, are u new?
B: Yea i just joined, but i havnt seen anyone as gorgeous as you, ur in such good shape! *blushes at what he's just said, he's a rather shy guy*
A: *blushes aslo as she fancies the pants off this sexy long haired guy* thanks, you have a nice physique too, and i love ur hair, er.. would you like to join me in the pool?
B: why not?! no one else comes in this early so we will be all alone
Brian and amy jump in the pool knowing they have at least an hour to spare before anyone comes in, they look into each others eyes and kiss passionatley...
the rest is for amy and brian to think about!!
A=amy
B=brian
Its was a gorgeous sunny day and amy took a trip to her local swimming pool, there she met a sexy lifeguard called brian...
A: Hi, er amd i early or is the pool not open yet?
B: no no dear people just dont come this time in the mornings!!
A: well i love my early morning swims!! like to keep fit!! I havnt seen you here before, are u new?
B: Yea i just joined, but i havnt seen anyone as gorgeous as you, ur in such good shape! *blushes at what he's just said, he's a rather shy guy*
A: *blushes aslo as she fancies the pants off this sexy long haired guy* thanks, you have a nice physique too, and i love ur hair, er.. would you like to join me in the pool?
B: why not?! no one else comes in this early so we will be all alone
Brian and amy jump in the pool knowing they have at least an hour to spare before anyone comes in, they look into each others eyes and kiss passionatley...
the rest is for amy and brian to think about!!
Oh how lovely...I'll just get on with thinking then, shall I? hahaha ;)
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<B><font color=pink>The Black Queen</B> wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Hey!! these stories are excellent im really liking them! Bohemian may-niac ur very talented!! will u do me one pretty pretty please, on with roger and brian!! please please!! lol
Leigh XxXxXx[/QUOTE]
Sure Leigh! I'll try to think one up. It'll take me a few minutes. Hmmmmmmm...... OK, I think I got one. I hope it's good.
L- Leigh
B- Brian
R- Roger
*It was a rainy day, and Leigh was in the local book store. She wanted to learn how to play guitar or drums. While browsing for a how to book she bumped into this gorgeous man with big, curly hair.*
B- Umph!
L- Oh dear! I'm so sorry. Here, let me help you up. My name is Leigh, what's yours?
B- Brian *Looks at her "How to Play Guitar" book and smiles* You like to play guitar?
L- Well, I want to learn. I really love how Brian May plays and he's inspired me. *She didn't realize who she was talking to* So, I figured I'd teach myself.
B-*flattered* Well, I play guitar. I can teach you. *Whispers in her ear* Maybe I can get you to play my solo in "We Will Rock You".
L- *Suddenly realizing who she was talking to* Wow! You're Brian May! *Starstruck* I'd love to have you teach me!!
B- Ok, You can come with me to my house. I can introduce you to someone who I'd think you'll like to meet.
*Brian took Leigh to his huge house. As soon as they got inside, She automatically noticed Roger Taylor sitting in the living room. The handsome drummer with the long blonde hair stood up and gave Leigh a hug as they met. Soon, all three of them went into Brian's music room. She noticed his Red Special sitting in a glass case. Roger took his seat at the Drum Set and Brian got Leigh all set for a Music lesson. He retrieved his Red Special and started to teach*
R- Bri, what song are we playing?
B- Oh, I figured we'd start with a little "Tie Your Mother Down"
L- Oh, I love that song!!
B- Great, Let's start.
*They started to play and before you know it Leigh quickly picked up on Guitar. Soon, the lesson came to an end and the 3 of them went into the living room*
L- May I have someting to drink? Like water or something?
B- Sure!
* Brian went into the kitchen and got Leigh a glass of water. Roger was chatting with her and soon Brian returned with her drink*
B- Here you are gorgeous! *blushes*
L- Thanks!
R- So Leigh, I was wondering... um... would you like to stay with us for the night?
B- Yes Leigh, we would love to have you.
L- Sure, I would love to stay!
*Soon, Brian and Roger led her upstairs to a huge bedroom. Leigh became quite comfortable with her rock star friends and fell asleep. In the middle of the night, a terrible thunderstorm blew up and scared both Brian and Roger. Leigh calmed them down*
L- Shhh! There there. Everythings ok boys.
B- Oh Dear!
R- I've never heard anything like that. Caught me off gaurd!
B- Wow Leigh! You're quite calm. I like that.
R- Yeah, Me too!
*Both Roger and Brian leaned over and kissed Leigh quite passionately and soon one thing led to another. And well, what happened next is between Brian, Roger, and Leigh*
I hope you like it Leigh. It's not the best one that I've wrote, but I hope you're happy with it.
I like to make people happy.
Anyways, I would like a story too. You pick the band member. It dosen't matter who, because I like them all. I would like them to be one of my teachers at school. My name is Kate.
Leigh XxXxXx[/QUOTE]
Sure Leigh! I'll try to think one up. It'll take me a few minutes. Hmmmmmmm...... OK, I think I got one. I hope it's good.
L- Leigh
B- Brian
R- Roger
*It was a rainy day, and Leigh was in the local book store. She wanted to learn how to play guitar or drums. While browsing for a how to book she bumped into this gorgeous man with big, curly hair.*
B- Umph!
L- Oh dear! I'm so sorry. Here, let me help you up. My name is Leigh, what's yours?
B- Brian *Looks at her "How to Play Guitar" book and smiles* You like to play guitar?
L- Well, I want to learn. I really love how Brian May plays and he's inspired me. *She didn't realize who she was talking to* So, I figured I'd teach myself.
B-*flattered* Well, I play guitar. I can teach you. *Whispers in her ear* Maybe I can get you to play my solo in "We Will Rock You".
L- *Suddenly realizing who she was talking to* Wow! You're Brian May! *Starstruck* I'd love to have you teach me!!
B- Ok, You can come with me to my house. I can introduce you to someone who I'd think you'll like to meet.
*Brian took Leigh to his huge house. As soon as they got inside, She automatically noticed Roger Taylor sitting in the living room. The handsome drummer with the long blonde hair stood up and gave Leigh a hug as they met. Soon, all three of them went into Brian's music room. She noticed his Red Special sitting in a glass case. Roger took his seat at the Drum Set and Brian got Leigh all set for a Music lesson. He retrieved his Red Special and started to teach*
R- Bri, what song are we playing?
B- Oh, I figured we'd start with a little "Tie Your Mother Down"
L- Oh, I love that song!!
B- Great, Let's start.
*They started to play and before you know it Leigh quickly picked up on Guitar. Soon, the lesson came to an end and the 3 of them went into the living room*
L- May I have someting to drink? Like water or something?
B- Sure!
* Brian went into the kitchen and got Leigh a glass of water. Roger was chatting with her and soon Brian returned with her drink*
B- Here you are gorgeous! *blushes*
L- Thanks!
R- So Leigh, I was wondering... um... would you like to stay with us for the night?
B- Yes Leigh, we would love to have you.
L- Sure, I would love to stay!
*Soon, Brian and Roger led her upstairs to a huge bedroom. Leigh became quite comfortable with her rock star friends and fell asleep. In the middle of the night, a terrible thunderstorm blew up and scared both Brian and Roger. Leigh calmed them down*
L- Shhh! There there. Everythings ok boys.
B- Oh Dear!
R- I've never heard anything like that. Caught me off gaurd!
B- Wow Leigh! You're quite calm. I like that.
R- Yeah, Me too!
*Both Roger and Brian leaned over and kissed Leigh quite passionately and soon one thing led to another. And well, what happened next is between Brian, Roger, and Leigh*
I hope you like it Leigh. It's not the best one that I've wrote, but I hope you're happy with it.
I like to make people happy.
Anyways, I would like a story too. You pick the band member. It dosen't matter who, because I like them all. I would like them to be one of my teachers at school. My name is Kate.