[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=pink>The Millionaire Waltz wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Fuck you all. I'm better than you. All of you.[/QUOTE]
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[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]FreddieForeverNr1 wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Check this out and see what you think.
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The song is a little pretty. But boring. Doesn't sound pleasant. If the singer were better and the instruments less chincy sounding, it probably wouldn't be *that* bad.
I think the only thing you'd come anywhere *near* equalling Queen with would be your insane self belief. In every other area, you are lacking. Keep going though. Everyone sucks early on.
And for *fucks* sake... when people tell you you're shit, don't flip out at them. What if these people were buying your CDs?!?!?! You'd be basically warning them off ever spending another dollar on you. Are you insane?!?!
Just shut the hell up and go write a better song.
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The song is a little pretty. But boring. Doesn't sound pleasant. If the singer were better and the instruments less chincy sounding, it probably wouldn't be *that* bad.
I think the only thing you'd come anywhere *near* equalling Queen with would be your insane self belief. In every other area, you are lacking. Keep going though. Everyone sucks early on.
And for *fucks* sake... when people tell you you're shit, don't flip out at them. What if these people were buying your CDs?!?!?! You'd be basically warning them off ever spending another dollar on you. Are you insane?!?!
Just shut the hell up and go write a better song.
Ok, listened to the song again.
I have to say:
It is a nice song, but its structure is too simple, you can hardly tell the chorus from the verses and so on.
The melody could be so much better; the singer is not bad but he lacks grace, and he's out of tune for a moment. I was waiting for the song to come alive... I mean, a really strong chorus or something like that... like Queen would do.
The arrangements are nice, though they could be better too. You have strings, you have guitars, you have backing vocals, YOU HAVE QUEEN, USE THAT. That kind of things can make a song so much better.
All in all, it is a nice song, though it doesn't sound like Queen. But you can tell that the singer is Freddie-esque when he sings some parts, that's a thing you could improve.
That's about all I can say...
I love writing songs too, and sometimes I'm too keen on the arrangements, and structure and stuff... I learned all that from Queen (and ELO, and APP, and KayaK, and Bee Gees, and so on...), and those things are almost the most important things on the song (the most important is the melody, OF COURSE).
Cheers
I have to say:
It is a nice song, but its structure is too simple, you can hardly tell the chorus from the verses and so on.
The melody could be so much better; the singer is not bad but he lacks grace, and he's out of tune for a moment. I was waiting for the song to come alive... I mean, a really strong chorus or something like that... like Queen would do.
The arrangements are nice, though they could be better too. You have strings, you have guitars, you have backing vocals, YOU HAVE QUEEN, USE THAT. That kind of things can make a song so much better.
All in all, it is a nice song, though it doesn't sound like Queen. But you can tell that the singer is Freddie-esque when he sings some parts, that's a thing you could improve.
That's about all I can say...
I love writing songs too, and sometimes I'm too keen on the arrangements, and structure and stuff... I learned all that from Queen (and ELO, and APP, and KayaK, and Bee Gees, and so on...), and those things are almost the most important things on the song (the most important is the melody, OF COURSE).
Cheers
*annoyed*
Muwhahwhahwhaha, I love all this fighting, It makes me laugh so much!!!!!!!!! :-S
Well, let's get stuck in then!
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color="#FF00FF">its_a_hard_life wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Muwhahwhahwhaha, I love all this fighting, It makes me laugh so much!!!!!!!!! :-S[/QUOTE]
O rly? o.o
O rly? o.o