Freddie poem

okay, i'm really bored, so i decided to write this poem. sorry if it's crap.:(

There's a man with talent,
who always knew his dreams.
some people say they knew him,
but they are all just schemes.
he knew he was going to be a star,
a legend with a name,
he laughed at the sign of danger,
and learned to play the game.
he never backed down,but put up a fight,
and now he's gone away,
the man who knew it all,
but to me he's here to stay.

Please feel free to write any of your own poems if you have any, i want to hear them! he he

Aaaw, nice poem! :)

Ooooooh it's lovely!..i would write a poem it's just that it always turns out really crappy! hehe

xD

Fab!

Freddie... dear Freddie
You are always in my thoughts
And i'd very much like to see you in shorts!

Some guys(and girls) think you're sexy and tough
And i think i prefer to see you with handcuffs!

On stage with that sexy, tight attire!
AND JESUS CHRIST, YOU'RE HOTTER THAN FIRE!!!

When i first saw you my heart when BOOOOOMMMM!!
So, you can guess that i would like to show you my bedroom!

You are the love of my life, the singer of songs...
And at Live at the Bowl you should of wore a thong!

End.

Sorry if it's a little.... 'hot under the collar'!

I hate poems, so I wont even read any of these.. I just HAD to reply because I saw Flashys ´name :D

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=FFFFOO>FreMe<h6>Get Down!!!! wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I hate poems, so I wont even read any of these.. I just HAD to reply because I saw Flashys ´name :D[/QUOTE]

You know, you are such a darling! You like my sexy poem?? lol! :/

that's awesome! I agree with the thong and handcuff parts!:)

Wow!! Those were some great poems nevermore:) and Flash! I swear I could never write something like that! Way to go you guys!!! Please, if you have anymore, share 'em!!! I just love rhythmical(sp? :P) poems.....especially if they're about Freddie!! Seriously, those poems made my boring ass morning great! Thanks again for sharing them! :D

The poems are great! I wished I could write poems like that...

freddie loves spagettii
even though hes old roger doesnt look like a yeti
brian is just like a teddy
john just is never ready
im sorry if you think this is scary

^ I thought it was funny !

Small little red shorts
Dancing like wildfire on stage
No respite in sight

^ Lookit, a haiku !

freddie likes candy
and rogers just dandy
brian is handy
john is ugly

(sorry, if your in love with john, but i coulndt think of anything that rhymed)

Ack !

John was always quite so they never knew
All the crazy things he could really do
People were shocked when they saw
Him having a life and gaped in awe
He was always so cute and sweet
Slightly prim and always neat
So now he has a poem several couplets long
Not nearly as good as Brian's birthday song
But it's the best we could do
So this is the silly poem from me to you
We love you John of the Impressively Common name
You're better than Harry Potter and should by right have more fame