New poem, not as dark as my other ones,enjoy and Id love some feedback. Constructive criticism is the best way to find out where improvement is needed!
Once upon a time I walked down a rocky road,
That simply made all my happiness just corrode,
I wandered down dark paths all the time,
Which left me with nothing that I could call mine.
I stumbled into a dream of all dreams,
That held happiness and no more screams.
It made me want to live once more,
As I opened and stepped through this new door.
I could breathe, I could dance,
I was given a second chance.
I could sing, I could shout,
And not get hurt for what came out of my mouth.
This story began with a once upon a time,
And I told it in the simplest of rhyme,
It even has a happily ever after,
Which allows me to enjoy life and much more laughter.
