Thank you all for the nice comments. I know my writing is a little crappy sometimes, especially about the section with "Mother". I wish I did a better job there. I am not 100% serious about this, but at the same time, I try my best to do it as good as I can in a very short period of time. :)
By the way, does anyone else tear up when reading this? I read this stuff between Freddie and Mary and GAWD I am bawling!! I just break down and cry. I need my tissues. Seriously. I'm a guy but man, that is so touching. What a romantic Freddie is!
Anyway, there's more to come, later. But that's it for now.
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I tear up when I read this-if you think this is sad-read that stpry in my blog-you'll cry for days-it wasn't written by me-but that girl can write!
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<b><font color="sky blue">taylormad101 wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I tear up when I read this-if you think this is sad-read that stpry in my blog-you'll cry for days-it wasn't written by me-but that girl can write![/QUOTE]
I'll take a look! Thanks!
I'll take a look! Thanks!
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]SomebodyWhoLoves wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<b><font color="sky blue">taylormad101 wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I tear up when I read this-if you think this is sad-read that stpry in my blog-you'll cry for days-it wasn't written by me-but that girl can write![/QUOTE]
I'll take a look! Thanks![/QUOTE]
no problem! : )
I'll take a look! Thanks![/QUOTE]
no problem! : )
Chapter 8: The Council
"Let me repeat: This was not the work of any ordinary Arch-Singer! There is only one kind of Singer who could have done this.", said the tall Singer in blue robes.
Brian, and John looked at each other. They knew someone who was sent to the Singer's Hell World. They looked at each other and thought of Freddie.
A Singer in red stood up, and said, "Freddie Mercury could have done this! He was sent to the Singer's Hell World. And he was always a bit reckless, even wild."
Soon other voices joined the chorus.
"Yeah, that Freddie was always wild, and reckless."
"With his power, he could threaten the universe, exacting vengeance!"
"He must be stopped!"
"He's evil!"
Brian and John grew troubled. They had known their friend to be a man of excess, but they could never believe Freddie was ever evil, or violent.
Both Brian and John tried to defend their friend, but their voices were drowned out by the crowd. And soon, there was nothing they could do. The crowd had unanimously agreed Freddie was the prime suspect.
Then suddenly, a loud voice was heard.
"Freddie is not evil! He's my friend, and I'll defend him from you morons!"
The crowd stopped murmuring, and looked at the speaker.
It was Roger Taylor.
"There is at least one other Arch-Singer on that planet besides Freddie. I bet it is Michael Jackson. You know, there's a reason he was called Wacko Jacko.", Roger declared.
The tall Singer in blue stamped his Staff, and order was restored.
"Roger is correct. We don't know who is responsible yet. But let me correct you all. The one responsible for this isn't an Arch-Singer. It is a Singer God. Only they have such power. Now, this meeting will be adjourned for later, until we can determine our next course of action."
The meeting ended, and the Singers dispersed. Only Brian, Roger, and John remained.
The trio formed a triangle, and smiled at each other. Freddie, their friend, was a Singer-God. That explained a lot. Live-Aid. Wembley. Rio. No wonder.
Both Brian and John started laughing at Roger. Roger gave them both a look. "What?"
"Uh Roger, you might've sounded more convincing if you didn't have red lipstick all over your face.", Brian said, smiling.
"Same old Roger. Women always went nuts over you. I wish they went nuts over me.", John added.
Roger blushed, and said, "I can't help it if I'm handsome. Besides, for a guy whose wife looks like a Jessica Alba clone, you sure complain a lot."
Brian said, "Yeah. This world is full of gorgeous women. But it looks like we're going to Freddie's world, guys."
"We have to find Freddie. We have to find out what's going on there."
And the three walked out of the room, excited.
After all this time, they were finally going to meet Freddie again.
* * *
Mary woke up, and she thought she was dreaming back in her home world. But everything felt so different. She felt tired, and her mind was clouded with fear, and doubt. This was something she never felt while in Heaven.
Then she remembered. Freddie was on the floor, lying still. Blood dripped out of his mouth, and nose. He wasn't breathing. He was dead.
"Let me repeat: This was not the work of any ordinary Arch-Singer! There is only one kind of Singer who could have done this.", said the tall Singer in blue robes.
Brian, and John looked at each other. They knew someone who was sent to the Singer's Hell World. They looked at each other and thought of Freddie.
A Singer in red stood up, and said, "Freddie Mercury could have done this! He was sent to the Singer's Hell World. And he was always a bit reckless, even wild."
Soon other voices joined the chorus.
"Yeah, that Freddie was always wild, and reckless."
"With his power, he could threaten the universe, exacting vengeance!"
"He must be stopped!"
"He's evil!"
Brian and John grew troubled. They had known their friend to be a man of excess, but they could never believe Freddie was ever evil, or violent.
Both Brian and John tried to defend their friend, but their voices were drowned out by the crowd. And soon, there was nothing they could do. The crowd had unanimously agreed Freddie was the prime suspect.
Then suddenly, a loud voice was heard.
"Freddie is not evil! He's my friend, and I'll defend him from you morons!"
The crowd stopped murmuring, and looked at the speaker.
It was Roger Taylor.
"There is at least one other Arch-Singer on that planet besides Freddie. I bet it is Michael Jackson. You know, there's a reason he was called Wacko Jacko.", Roger declared.
The tall Singer in blue stamped his Staff, and order was restored.
"Roger is correct. We don't know who is responsible yet. But let me correct you all. The one responsible for this isn't an Arch-Singer. It is a Singer God. Only they have such power. Now, this meeting will be adjourned for later, until we can determine our next course of action."
The meeting ended, and the Singers dispersed. Only Brian, Roger, and John remained.
The trio formed a triangle, and smiled at each other. Freddie, their friend, was a Singer-God. That explained a lot. Live-Aid. Wembley. Rio. No wonder.
Both Brian and John started laughing at Roger. Roger gave them both a look. "What?"
"Uh Roger, you might've sounded more convincing if you didn't have red lipstick all over your face.", Brian said, smiling.
"Same old Roger. Women always went nuts over you. I wish they went nuts over me.", John added.
Roger blushed, and said, "I can't help it if I'm handsome. Besides, for a guy whose wife looks like a Jessica Alba clone, you sure complain a lot."
Brian said, "Yeah. This world is full of gorgeous women. But it looks like we're going to Freddie's world, guys."
"We have to find Freddie. We have to find out what's going on there."
And the three walked out of the room, excited.
After all this time, they were finally going to meet Freddie again.
* * *
Mary woke up, and she thought she was dreaming back in her home world. But everything felt so different. She felt tired, and her mind was clouded with fear, and doubt. This was something she never felt while in Heaven.
Then she remembered. Freddie was on the floor, lying still. Blood dripped out of his mouth, and nose. He wasn't breathing. He was dead.
*gasps* oh no! :o
i can't wait to see what u put up next!
i can't wait to see what u put up next!
Nice! Its just keeps getting better and better. I definetly want to keep up with this.
Chapter 9: First Contact
Brian was ready. He held his "Red Special" staff lovingly. It was red like his fire. The council decided that Brian, Roger, and John were best qualified to enter the portal. After all, if Freddie was the culprit, the former friends and bandmates of Freddie's were best able to possibly persuade Freddie to stop.
Gwen Stefani, an Arch-Singer in Gold, gave each of them a kiss on the cheek for luck. Each of them blushed. Gwen Stefani was the most powerful and most beautiful female Arch-Singer in the world. She was even hotter than the Indigenous women of the world. Secretly, all of the male singers had a slight crush on Gwen. They bowed to her in return. Her brilliant smile alone made them dizzy.
They were ready. The group of Singers along with all the other Singers in the universe melded their powers together. Thousands and thousands of Singers across the universe in unison sang the song-spell that would create a portal to the Singer Hell world. It took an enormous amount of energy to create it, and finally, the Portal opened. Brian, Roger, and John walked into the portal, and stepped into Freddie's world.
* * *
(To be continued later)
Brian was ready. He held his "Red Special" staff lovingly. It was red like his fire. The council decided that Brian, Roger, and John were best qualified to enter the portal. After all, if Freddie was the culprit, the former friends and bandmates of Freddie's were best able to possibly persuade Freddie to stop.
Gwen Stefani, an Arch-Singer in Gold, gave each of them a kiss on the cheek for luck. Each of them blushed. Gwen Stefani was the most powerful and most beautiful female Arch-Singer in the world. She was even hotter than the Indigenous women of the world. Secretly, all of the male singers had a slight crush on Gwen. They bowed to her in return. Her brilliant smile alone made them dizzy.
They were ready. The group of Singers along with all the other Singers in the universe melded their powers together. Thousands and thousands of Singers across the universe in unison sang the song-spell that would create a portal to the Singer Hell world. It took an enormous amount of energy to create it, and finally, the Portal opened. Brian, Roger, and John walked into the portal, and stepped into Freddie's world.
* * *
(To be continued later)
sounds like someone likes gwen stefani to me. lol. keep up with it.
Gwen Stefani is seriously hot.
Anyway, I want to stop this thread. I don't feel like doing this anymore.
I'll give you the conclusion and summary.
This story was really about redemption, and the true meaning of music. Both Michael Jackson, and Freddie Mercury entered into a Music "Hell" World for different reasons.
Freddie learned from his mistakes of his former life. Learning to enjoy simple pleasures and avoid excesses, and over-indulgence.
Michael also learns from his mistakes. Mainly to love himself, and learn the true meaning of Music, and Life, which is to spread joy, happiness, and love.
Freddie dies, but is redeemed and restored by Mother, and Father, who created both Michael and Freddie to be musical Gods. He is released from the Musical hell. And both Mary, Freddie rejoin the bandmates in their Musical world to try and stop Michael.
Michael meanwhile gains more and more power, destroying many Musical Worlds.
As a final front against Michael, Freddie and the rest of the Singers join to stop him. And there is a huge battle, and both sides are bloodied. Many Singers die, and Michael is wounded fatally.
As a dooms-day device plan, Michael unleashes his final song, a huge Musical discordant Chord that echoes repeatedly throughout the universe, threatening to destroy it.
Freddie is the last of the Singers that is still functional, and he gives a heartfelt plea to Michael, even loving him. For they are in fact, brothers.
Freddie reaches Michael, and persuades him to turn from his evil ways. And as Michael turns, he is restored to his orignal self. We see him transformed from a scary monster to the original Michael Jackson, who is a handsome young man.
Michael and Freddie stand against the incoming Musical Chord Wave, but it is too powerful. They will both die, even if they manage to stop it.
In a final act of redemption, Michael pushes Freddie out of the way, and faces the Assault himself. Michael manages to create a counter-Chord that destroys the deadly wave, but in the process, he is also destroyed.
The universe is saved, and Michael finds redemption. In death, he is revived by Mother and Father, and freed from the Musical Hell world. And Michael joins Freddie and the last Musical World that still exists, and together embrace in love, creating music that heals the universe.
The End.
:D
Anyway, I want to stop this thread. I don't feel like doing this anymore.
I'll give you the conclusion and summary.
This story was really about redemption, and the true meaning of music. Both Michael Jackson, and Freddie Mercury entered into a Music "Hell" World for different reasons.
Freddie learned from his mistakes of his former life. Learning to enjoy simple pleasures and avoid excesses, and over-indulgence.
Michael also learns from his mistakes. Mainly to love himself, and learn the true meaning of Music, and Life, which is to spread joy, happiness, and love.
Freddie dies, but is redeemed and restored by Mother, and Father, who created both Michael and Freddie to be musical Gods. He is released from the Musical hell. And both Mary, Freddie rejoin the bandmates in their Musical world to try and stop Michael.
Michael meanwhile gains more and more power, destroying many Musical Worlds.
As a final front against Michael, Freddie and the rest of the Singers join to stop him. And there is a huge battle, and both sides are bloodied. Many Singers die, and Michael is wounded fatally.
As a dooms-day device plan, Michael unleashes his final song, a huge Musical discordant Chord that echoes repeatedly throughout the universe, threatening to destroy it.
Freddie is the last of the Singers that is still functional, and he gives a heartfelt plea to Michael, even loving him. For they are in fact, brothers.
Freddie reaches Michael, and persuades him to turn from his evil ways. And as Michael turns, he is restored to his orignal self. We see him transformed from a scary monster to the original Michael Jackson, who is a handsome young man.
Michael and Freddie stand against the incoming Musical Chord Wave, but it is too powerful. They will both die, even if they manage to stop it.
In a final act of redemption, Michael pushes Freddie out of the way, and faces the Assault himself. Michael manages to create a counter-Chord that destroys the deadly wave, but in the process, he is also destroyed.
The universe is saved, and Michael finds redemption. In death, he is revived by Mother and Father, and freed from the Musical Hell world. And Michael joins Freddie and the last Musical World that still exists, and together embrace in love, creating music that heals the universe.
The End.
:D
^ [standing ovation] I knew I wouldn't be disappointed!
I hope you write another story when you get the chance, or soon, or whenever. I love your posts!
I hope you write another story when you get the chance, or soon, or whenever. I love your posts!
Oh, and Mary and Freddie live happily ever after in the Last musical world, along with the surviving Singers, which include the Queen band and GWEN STEFANI!!
Roger is Roger. Surrounded by beautiful Indigenous ladies, but he secretly likes Gwen, who doesn't like him.
John settles down happily in the desert with his Jessica Alba look alike, and has 7 children.
Brian also finds love with a beauty, and lives happily, having many children.
Gwen Stefani had a crush on Freddie, but seeing Freddie had only eyes for Mary, finds love with another, a handsome Indigenous Man.
Everyone is happy, and make beautiful music together!!
Roger is Roger. Surrounded by beautiful Indigenous ladies, but he secretly likes Gwen, who doesn't like him.
John settles down happily in the desert with his Jessica Alba look alike, and has 7 children.
Brian also finds love with a beauty, and lives happily, having many children.
Gwen Stefani had a crush on Freddie, but seeing Freddie had only eyes for Mary, finds love with another, a handsome Indigenous Man.
Everyone is happy, and make beautiful music together!!
^ Is the "Indigineous Man" you? :P
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=blue> <b>Water Baby wrote: [/QUOTENAME]^ [standing ovation] I knew I wouldn't be disappointed!
I hope you write another story when you get the chance, or soon, or whenever. I love your posts! [/QUOTE]
Thank you! I may write another story..but not now. But I definitely had a good time writing this one. Hope everyone enjoyed it!
Music = Life = Spread Love, and Joy.
I hope you write another story when you get the chance, or soon, or whenever. I love your posts! [/QUOTE]
Thank you! I may write another story..but not now. But I definitely had a good time writing this one. Hope everyone enjoyed it!
Music = Life = Spread Love, and Joy.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=blue> <b>Water Baby wrote: [/QUOTENAME]^ Is the "Indigineous Man" you? :P [/QUOTE]
LOL. Maybe.;)
LOL. Maybe.;)