Treasure Moment- Demo of a new song

brian wanna be may and all others who talk shit about us, look at this and tell me its not good or doesn't have any talent!

If you do say that then you are in deep denial

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C1d6ERo_-Ew

Marginal, at best.

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Haystacks Calhounski wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Marginal, at best. [/QUOTE]

ah shut up, you couldnt do that in your entire life

What a boring piece. Nothing special about it at all.

You're a good player. Although it's hard to imagine what a complete song would sound like.

For some reason I can only imagine it with loud guitars, pounding drums, synthesizers and a female singer

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]FriedChicken<br><font size=1>The Almighty</font> wrote: [/QUOTENAME]You're a good player. Although it's hard to imagine what a complete song would sound like.

For some reason I can only imagine it with loud guitars, pounding drums, synthesizers and a female singer[/QUOTE]

yeah it will have loud guitars, drums and synth but our singer isnt a female which is good.

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<b><font color=009966>?Freya? wrote: [/QUOTENAME]What a boring piece. Nothing special about it at all.[/QUOTE]

yeah and the talentless garbage you listen to is so special :D

I would try to go for a bit of variation. I think the idea is pretty good, and it's well played. But maybe try to do something that is different from the rest.

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]FriedChicken<br><font size=1>The Almighty</font> wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I would try to go for a bit of variation. I think the idea is pretty good, and it's well played. But maybe try to do something that is different from the rest.[/QUOTE]

different from the rest? im not sure what you are talking about as this is so different from the garbage they play on tv and radio it isnt even funny.

Also it will sound even better when we put on guitars, drums, bass and vocals on it.

Nice net curtains.

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]pow wow wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Nice net curtains.[/QUOTE]

thanks! i like your response since you know that you can't find anything to complain about on the song so you had to talk about the curtain :D

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]FriedChicken<br><font size=1>The Almighty</font> wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I would try to go for a bit of variation. I think the idea is pretty good, and it's well played. But maybe try to do something that is different from the rest.[/QUOTE]

different from the rest? im not sure what you are talking about as this is so different from the garbage they play on tv and radio it isnt even funny.

Also it will sound even better when we put on guitars, drums, bass and vocals on it.[/QUOTE]

In other words, maybe you should use more variety in what you write. Most if not all of your other songs sound the same, and I'm not saying their bad either. I think what you're writing is wonderful, but you need to keep everything interesting, otherwise your audience is going to get bored.

For instance, I experiment with different genres of music including jazz, metal, vaudiville, etc. It may sound crazy, but it's always interesting to hear an artist with variaty.

Queen is one of the few bands to truly open up their horizons, therefore if somebody like you were to reintroduce that into the musical world it would make a wonderful impression (hopefully).

its fun to see people in denial

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<b><font color=009966>?Freya? wrote: [/QUOTENAME]What a boring piece. Nothing special about it at all.[/QUOTE]

yeah and the talentless garbage you listen to is so special :D[/QUOTE]
I listen to Queen, you spac.