[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<b><font color=009966>?Freya? wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<b><font color=009966>?Freya? wrote: [/QUOTENAME]What a boring piece. Nothing special about it at all.[/QUOTE]
yeah and the talentless garbage you listen to is so special :D[/QUOTE]
I listen to Queen, you spac. [/QUOTE]
besides Queen
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I know this may sound mean, but it sounds like the theme song on a video game I have a little bit. I think it's the keyboards.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=FF0033 face=symbol>Freddie wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]FriedChicken<br><font size=1>The Almighty</font> wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I would try to go for a bit of variation. I think the idea is pretty good, and it's well played. But maybe try to do something that is different from the rest.[/QUOTE]
different from the rest? im not sure what you are talking about as this is so different from the garbage they play on tv and radio it isnt even funny.
Also it will sound even better when we put on guitars, drums, bass and vocals on it.[/QUOTE]
In other words, maybe you should use more variety in what you write. Most if not all of your other songs sound the same, and I'm not saying their bad either. I think what you're writing is wonderful, but you need to keep everything interesting, otherwise your audience is going to get bored.
For instance, I experiment with different genres of music including jazz, metal, vaudiville, etc. It may sound crazy, but it's always interesting to hear an artist with variaty.
Queen is one of the few bands to truly open up their horizons, therefore if somebody like you were to reintroduce that into the musical world it would make a wonderful impression (hopefully). [/QUOTE]
you are right about variation and we intend to make songs that are different, if you listen to the 4 songs that are on the myspace site you will hear that there is quite a difference.
In the end all that matters is that the song is good, catchy and has alot of emotion in it, i understand what you mean and thanks for the advice
different from the rest? im not sure what you are talking about as this is so different from the garbage they play on tv and radio it isnt even funny.
Also it will sound even better when we put on guitars, drums, bass and vocals on it.[/QUOTE]
In other words, maybe you should use more variety in what you write. Most if not all of your other songs sound the same, and I'm not saying their bad either. I think what you're writing is wonderful, but you need to keep everything interesting, otherwise your audience is going to get bored.
For instance, I experiment with different genres of music including jazz, metal, vaudiville, etc. It may sound crazy, but it's always interesting to hear an artist with variaty.
Queen is one of the few bands to truly open up their horizons, therefore if somebody like you were to reintroduce that into the musical world it would make a wonderful impression (hopefully). [/QUOTE]
you are right about variation and we intend to make songs that are different, if you listen to the 4 songs that are on the myspace site you will hear that there is quite a difference.
In the end all that matters is that the song is good, catchy and has alot of emotion in it, i understand what you mean and thanks for the advice
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=red> Freddie's Valentine! wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I know this may sound mean, but it sounds like the theme song on a video game I have a little bit. I think it's the keyboards. [/QUOTE]
then you could say the same thing about all the piano stuff freddie played, that its video game music
then you could say the same thing about all the piano stuff freddie played, that its video game music
Oh, and one more thing! This is just my advice, but perhaps you could experiment more with chord progressions. Your music just sounds a tad predictable...how about some deceptive cadences or have some more noticable half cadences? Just a suggestion, take it or leave it.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=red> Freddie's Valentine! wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I know this may sound mean, but it sounds like the theme song on a video game I have a little bit. I think it's the keyboards. [/QUOTE]
then you could say the same thing about all the piano stuff freddie played, that its video game music[/QUOTE]
I don't know if I could. They are different styles of music, which is good. The same style gets boring after a while. I think that's what you intended, no? To bring your own music to the table?
then you could say the same thing about all the piano stuff freddie played, that its video game music[/QUOTE]
I don't know if I could. They are different styles of music, which is good. The same style gets boring after a while. I think that's what you intended, no? To bring your own music to the table?
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=FF0033 face=symbol>Freddie wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Oh, and one more thing! This is just my advice, but perhaps you could experiment more with chord progressions. Your music just sounds a tad predictable...how about some deceptive cadences or have some more noticable half cadences? Just a suggestion, take it or leave it.[/QUOTE]
well i dont think its predictable at all, quite the opposite. If you think this is predictable then i can imagine what you think of all the talentless 3 chord bands on Mtv :)
thanks for the musical advice but we havent taken any music lessons so we dont know anything about reading notes or musical language.
well i dont think its predictable at all, quite the opposite. If you think this is predictable then i can imagine what you think of all the talentless 3 chord bands on Mtv :)
thanks for the musical advice but we havent taken any music lessons so we dont know anything about reading notes or musical language.
Oh my God...ever thought about using twelve tone? It has to be the craziest thing to ever write in, you should check it out. It's worth a glance, even if you're not willing to experiment with it.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=red> Freddie's Valentine! wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=red> Freddie's Valentine! wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I know this may sound mean, but it sounds like the theme song on a video game I have a little bit. I think it's the keyboards. [/QUOTE]
then you could say the same thing about all the piano stuff freddie played, that its video game music[/QUOTE]
I don't know if I could. They are different styles of music, which is good. The same style gets boring after a while. I think that's what you intended, no? To bring your own music to the table? [/QUOTE]
yeah and as i said before, it will sound alot better when drums, guitar, bass and vocals are put on this
then you could say the same thing about all the piano stuff freddie played, that its video game music[/QUOTE]
I don't know if I could. They are different styles of music, which is good. The same style gets boring after a while. I think that's what you intended, no? To bring your own music to the table? [/QUOTE]
yeah and as i said before, it will sound alot better when drums, guitar, bass and vocals are put on this
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=FF0033 face=symbol>Freddie wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Oh my God...ever thought about using twelve tone? It has to be the craziest thing to ever write in, you should check it out. It's worth a glance, even if you're not willing to experiment with it.
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im sorry i don't understand what you mean
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im sorry i don't understand what you mean
Atheist, what are you trying to prove to us?
It's not us you need to convince that you guys are the greatest band in the world.
But honestly, what that attitude of yours, I doubt you'll make it far.
It's not us you need to convince that you guys are the greatest band in the world.
But honestly, what that attitude of yours, I doubt you'll make it far.
I like it, i've never been a huge fan of your other stuff (on myspace) but this is different. It's like listening to freddie play through your fingers, its amazing. i wish i could eventual get that could on my piano.
well done, and i think you have the personality to go with it. if your not on mtv in a year i will eat my slippers.
well done, and i think you have the personality to go with it. if your not on mtv in a year i will eat my slippers.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=pink>Account Deleted wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Atheist, what are you trying to prove to us?
It's not us you need to convince that you guys are the greatest band in the world.
But honestly, what that attitude of yours, I doubt you'll make it far.[/QUOTE]
man, im not a bad guy, i just get annoyed when credit isnt given where its supposed to. I mean here they talk shit about us and then give credit to talentless 3 chord bands..
It's not us you need to convince that you guys are the greatest band in the world.
But honestly, what that attitude of yours, I doubt you'll make it far.[/QUOTE]
man, im not a bad guy, i just get annoyed when credit isnt given where its supposed to. I mean here they talk shit about us and then give credit to talentless 3 chord bands..
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME]brian wanna be may and all others who talk shit about us, look at this and tell me its not good or doesn't have any talent!
If you do say that then you are in deep denial
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C1d6ERo_-Ew[/QUOTE]
Hey Athiest.
You're a good player sir.
The piece you are playing is just a little too long though it is the nucleus of a pretty good song.When you've finished it get it on the Tube
with guitars,drums,lyrics and stuff.Cheers bud =}
If you do say that then you are in deep denial
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C1d6ERo_-Ew[/QUOTE]
Hey Athiest.
You're a good player sir.
The piece you are playing is just a little too long though it is the nucleus of a pretty good song.When you've finished it get it on the Tube
with guitars,drums,lyrics and stuff.Cheers bud =}
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=FF0033 face=symbol>Freddie wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Oh, and one more thing! This is just my advice, but perhaps you could experiment more with chord progressions. Your music just sounds a tad predictable...how about some deceptive cadences or have some more noticable half cadences? Just a suggestion, take it or leave it.[/QUOTE]
well i dont think its predictable at all, quite the opposite. If you think this is predictable then i can imagine what you think of all the talentless 3 chord bands on Mtv :)
thanks for the musical advice but we havent taken any music lessons so we dont know anything about reading notes or musical language.[/QUOTE]
No problem, I'm more than happy to give a musician my advice.
Just as a side note, you should be really concerned about how your audience interprets your music. If we say that your music sounds predictable then it probably is. A composer looks at his/her music differently than the audience...it's only natural. Look at what we're saying as a chance to improve and discover new path ways into composing music that will be greater than you could ever imagine.
And just ignore people who have gotten used to calling your music shit...it's not. You just might not know how to handle criticism, which is understandle I guess. Most if not all of the Queenzoners don't like your attitude, I simply look past that. I wasn't being mean by the way, I really just want to help out. I love listening to other people's music...it's a hobby of mine.
well i dont think its predictable at all, quite the opposite. If you think this is predictable then i can imagine what you think of all the talentless 3 chord bands on Mtv :)
thanks for the musical advice but we havent taken any music lessons so we dont know anything about reading notes or musical language.[/QUOTE]
No problem, I'm more than happy to give a musician my advice.
Just as a side note, you should be really concerned about how your audience interprets your music. If we say that your music sounds predictable then it probably is. A composer looks at his/her music differently than the audience...it's only natural. Look at what we're saying as a chance to improve and discover new path ways into composing music that will be greater than you could ever imagine.
And just ignore people who have gotten used to calling your music shit...it's not. You just might not know how to handle criticism, which is understandle I guess. Most if not all of the Queenzoners don't like your attitude, I simply look past that. I wasn't being mean by the way, I really just want to help out. I love listening to other people's music...it's a hobby of mine.