[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=FF0033 face=symbol>Freddie wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Oh my God...ever thought about using twelve tone? It has to be the craziest thing to ever write in, you should check it out. It's worth a glance, even if you're not willing to experiment with it.
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im sorry i don't understand what you mean[/QUOTE]
It's impossible to teach on a forum, but here is a site that explains it. I know your familiarity with musical terms is brief, but I thougt I'd just give you a link in case you were interested.
http://www.robertkelleyphd.com/12-tone.htm#12Tone
It's a scary way to write music, but it's interesting to say the least. Enjoy!
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[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=FF0033 face=symbol>Freddie wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=FF0033 face=symbol>Freddie wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Oh, and one more thing! This is just my advice, but perhaps you could experiment more with chord progressions. Your music just sounds a tad predictable...how about some deceptive cadences or have some more noticable half cadences? Just a suggestion, take it or leave it.[/QUOTE]
well i dont think its predictable at all, quite the opposite. If you think this is predictable then i can imagine what you think of all the talentless 3 chord bands on Mtv :)
thanks for the musical advice but we havent taken any music lessons so we dont know anything about reading notes or musical language.[/QUOTE]
No problem, I'm more than happy to give a musician my advice.
Just as a side note, you should be really concerned about how your audience interprets your music. If we say that your music sounds predictable then it probably is. A composer looks at his/her music differently than the audience...it's only natural. Look at what we're saying as a chance to improve and discover new path ways into composing music that will be greater than you could ever imagine.
And just ignore people who have gotten used to calling your music shit...it's not. You just might not know how to handle criticism, which is understandle I guess. Most if not all of the Queenzoners don't like your attitude, I simply look past that. I wasn't being mean by the way, I really just want to help out. I love listening to other people's music...it's a hobby of mine.
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thanks man! i dont know about the predictable thing but if it sounds that way to you then alright but we just write what comes naturally and do it our way.
well i dont think its predictable at all, quite the opposite. If you think this is predictable then i can imagine what you think of all the talentless 3 chord bands on Mtv :)
thanks for the musical advice but we havent taken any music lessons so we dont know anything about reading notes or musical language.[/QUOTE]
No problem, I'm more than happy to give a musician my advice.
Just as a side note, you should be really concerned about how your audience interprets your music. If we say that your music sounds predictable then it probably is. A composer looks at his/her music differently than the audience...it's only natural. Look at what we're saying as a chance to improve and discover new path ways into composing music that will be greater than you could ever imagine.
And just ignore people who have gotten used to calling your music shit...it's not. You just might not know how to handle criticism, which is understandle I guess. Most if not all of the Queenzoners don't like your attitude, I simply look past that. I wasn't being mean by the way, I really just want to help out. I love listening to other people's music...it's a hobby of mine.
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thanks man! i dont know about the predictable thing but if it sounds that way to you then alright but we just write what comes naturally and do it our way.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]kween-iloveit wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I like it, i've never been a huge fan of your other stuff (on myspace) but this is different. It's like listening to freddie play through your fingers, its amazing. i wish i could eventual get that could on my piano.
well done, and i think you have the personality to go with it. if your not on mtv in a year i will eat my slippers.[/QUOTE]
Thanks i dont know if you're being sarcastic or not but thanks if ur being serious.
well done, and i think you have the personality to go with it. if your not on mtv in a year i will eat my slippers.[/QUOTE]
Thanks i dont know if you're being sarcastic or not but thanks if ur being serious.
No im not being sarcastic, my english isnt that good so maybe it came out wrong.
I think the way you splay is very much like the sound that freddie used to make. I mean when he was 5 years old, he got a casio electric keyboard from argos and used to beat it with his child sized hands. You dont only remeind me of freddie in the way you play, you have other likeness. you too have eyes and hair, but on the other hand you are all cu..........................................................
I think the way you splay is very much like the sound that freddie used to make. I mean when he was 5 years old, he got a casio electric keyboard from argos and used to beat it with his child sized hands. You dont only remeind me of freddie in the way you play, you have other likeness. you too have eyes and hair, but on the other hand you are all cu..........................................................
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]kween-iloveit wrote: [/QUOTENAME]No im not being sarcastic, my english isnt that good so maybe it came out wrong.
I think the way you splay is very much like the sound that freddie used to make. I mean when he was 5 years old, he got a casio electric keyboard from argos and used to beat it with his child sized hands. You dont only remeind me of freddie in the way you play, you have other likeness. you too have eyes and hair, but on the other hand you are all cu..........................................................[/QUOTE]
ah shut up bitch, you couldnt compose anything like that if you practised your entire life. Fuck off and die talentless garbage creature!
I think the way you splay is very much like the sound that freddie used to make. I mean when he was 5 years old, he got a casio electric keyboard from argos and used to beat it with his child sized hands. You dont only remeind me of freddie in the way you play, you have other likeness. you too have eyes and hair, but on the other hand you are all cu..........................................................[/QUOTE]
ah shut up bitch, you couldnt compose anything like that if you practised your entire life. Fuck off and die talentless garbage creature!
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]kween-iloveit wrote: [/QUOTENAME]No im not being sarcastic, my english isnt that good so maybe it came out wrong.
I think the way you splay is very much like the sound that freddie used to make. I mean when he was 5 years old, he got a casio electric keyboard from argos and used to beat it with his child sized hands. You dont only remeind me of freddie in the way you play, you have other likeness. you too have eyes and hair, but on the other hand you are all cu..........................................................[/QUOTE]
You are soooo funny , its fine , try to bring me down it wont work , you see , i know what good music is and i know that this is good stuff period.
I think the way you splay is very much like the sound that freddie used to make. I mean when he was 5 years old, he got a casio electric keyboard from argos and used to beat it with his child sized hands. You dont only remeind me of freddie in the way you play, you have other likeness. you too have eyes and hair, but on the other hand you are all cu..........................................................[/QUOTE]
You are soooo funny , its fine , try to bring me down it wont work , you see , i know what good music is and i know that this is good stuff period.
yes
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME]its fun to see people in denial[/QUOTE]
I agree....any criticism you receive results in abuse of those that fail to "appreciate" your "talent".
I could barely make out the melody due to the swathes of synth washes - presumably due to your own awareness of the limitations of the piece.
I agree....any criticism you receive results in abuse of those that fail to "appreciate" your "talent".
I could barely make out the melody due to the swathes of synth washes - presumably due to your own awareness of the limitations of the piece.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Penetration_Guru wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME]its fun to see people in denial[/QUOTE]
I agree....any criticism you receive results in abuse of those that fail to "appreciate" your "talent".
I could barely make out the melody due to the swathes of synth washes - presumably due to your own awareness of the limitations of the piece.
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you could barely make it out since your mind can't comprehend it if its too complex
I agree....any criticism you receive results in abuse of those that fail to "appreciate" your "talent".
I could barely make out the melody due to the swathes of synth washes - presumably due to your own awareness of the limitations of the piece.
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you could barely make it out since your mind can't comprehend it if its too complex
what you have "performed" is so very derivative. you need to try for an original arrangement.
this sounds very 1970s
barclay james harvest/camel/genesis/yes/manfred mann's earthband
there's even some Freddie-esque, type Rachmaninov styling in there too
and you are in denial - if you think you can get into music without accepting critism then you will need thick skin...your approach: "you're all talking bollox if you don't like this" will make you no firends, and consequently no listeners
nice try but as i said...derivative
this sounds very 1970s
barclay james harvest/camel/genesis/yes/manfred mann's earthband
there's even some Freddie-esque, type Rachmaninov styling in there too
and you are in denial - if you think you can get into music without accepting critism then you will need thick skin...your approach: "you're all talking bollox if you don't like this" will make you no firends, and consequently no listeners
nice try but as i said...derivative
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Penetration_Guru wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME]its fun to see people in denial[/QUOTE]
I agree....any criticism you receive results in abuse of those that fail to "appreciate" your "talent".
I could barely make out the melody due to the swathes of synth washes - presumably due to your own awareness of the limitations of the piece.
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You guys arent real queen fans , real queen fans would have appreciated this kind of music instead you guys keep talking like this music sucks and keep talking down upon us.
I know freddie would have liked our music.
I agree....any criticism you receive results in abuse of those that fail to "appreciate" your "talent".
I could barely make out the melody due to the swathes of synth washes - presumably due to your own awareness of the limitations of the piece.
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You guys arent real queen fans , real queen fans would have appreciated this kind of music instead you guys keep talking like this music sucks and keep talking down upon us.
I know freddie would have liked our music.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=green>Bren<font color=orange>ski wrote: [/QUOTENAME]what you have "performed" is so very derivative. you need to try for an original arrangement.
this sounds very 1970s
barclay james harvest/camel/genesis/yes/manfred mann's earthband
there's even some Freddie-esque, type Rachmaninov styling in there too
and you are in denial - if you think you can get into music without accepting critism then you will need thick skin...your approach: "you're all talking bollox if you don't like this" will make you no firends, and consequently no listeners
nice try but as i said...derivative[/QUOTE]
i want you to show me something besides Queen that is better and not boring than this :)
besides, good music is good music, forget when its done, Queen songs are made 20, 30 years ago and they are way better than any shit on mtv or radio.
None of the popular garbage bands on mtv or radio has anything on this song and thats a fact!
this sounds very 1970s
barclay james harvest/camel/genesis/yes/manfred mann's earthband
there's even some Freddie-esque, type Rachmaninov styling in there too
and you are in denial - if you think you can get into music without accepting critism then you will need thick skin...your approach: "you're all talking bollox if you don't like this" will make you no firends, and consequently no listeners
nice try but as i said...derivative[/QUOTE]
i want you to show me something besides Queen that is better and not boring than this :)
besides, good music is good music, forget when its done, Queen songs are made 20, 30 years ago and they are way better than any shit on mtv or radio.
None of the popular garbage bands on mtv or radio has anything on this song and thats a fact!
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=green>Bren<font color=orange>ski wrote: [/QUOTENAME]what you have "performed" is so very derivative. you need to try for an original arrangement.
this sounds very 1970s
barclay james harvest/camel/genesis/yes/manfred mann's earthband
there's even some Freddie-esque, type Rachmaninov styling in there too
and you are in denial - if you think you can get into music without accepting critism then you will need thick skin...your approach: "you're all talking bollox if you don't like this" will make you no firends, and consequently no listeners
nice try but as i said...derivative[/QUOTE]
Exuse me but then you can say that freddie had no originality either cause he was inspired from such people as Rachmaninov , chopin etc. and played similar to them.
What you are saying is rubbish. Nobody owns a certain way of playing, a good song is a good song.
It just happen to be that , the best songs are written in a classical way , therefore many of us play with the same style.
cut the crap with your originality thing.
this sounds very 1970s
barclay james harvest/camel/genesis/yes/manfred mann's earthband
there's even some Freddie-esque, type Rachmaninov styling in there too
and you are in denial - if you think you can get into music without accepting critism then you will need thick skin...your approach: "you're all talking bollox if you don't like this" will make you no firends, and consequently no listeners
nice try but as i said...derivative[/QUOTE]
Exuse me but then you can say that freddie had no originality either cause he was inspired from such people as Rachmaninov , chopin etc. and played similar to them.
What you are saying is rubbish. Nobody owns a certain way of playing, a good song is a good song.
It just happen to be that , the best songs are written in a classical way , therefore many of us play with the same style.
cut the crap with your originality thing.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<b><font color=009966>?Freya? wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<b><font color=009966>?Freya? wrote: [/QUOTENAME]What a boring piece. Nothing special about it at all.[/QUOTE]
yeah and the talentless garbage you listen to is so special :D[/QUOTE]
I listen to Queen, you spac. [/QUOTE]
besides Queen [/QUOTE]
Well it would seem that anything to you is crap besides Queen and Treasure Moment, so I'm not going to even try and defend the other 'talentless garbage' that I listen to.
yeah and the talentless garbage you listen to is so special :D[/QUOTE]
I listen to Queen, you spac. [/QUOTE]
besides Queen [/QUOTE]
Well it would seem that anything to you is crap besides Queen and Treasure Moment, so I'm not going to even try and defend the other 'talentless garbage' that I listen to.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Atheist wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=red> Freddie's Valentine! wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I know this may sound mean, but it sounds like the theme song on a video game I have a little bit. I think it's the keyboards. [/QUOTE]
then you could say the same thing about all the piano stuff freddie played, that its video game music[/QUOTE]
Yeah, what kind of Casio keyboard is that? Maybe you should use it's on-board rhythm accompaniment. Oh, you did.
then you could say the same thing about all the piano stuff freddie played, that its video game music[/QUOTE]
Yeah, what kind of Casio keyboard is that? Maybe you should use it's on-board rhythm accompaniment. Oh, you did.