To the_hero.... you've got some phenominal writing skills my dear, keep them coming.
You're definatly one of the very talented writers on QZ, i hope you can make it big one day with them!
I'll post some more of mine...
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A poem I once wrote about my best friend.
Jessica is so cool and so fun
Her eyes shine like the sun
Her face is a real beauty
Her smile is a real cutie
And she is my best friend.
Jessica makes me feel nice and happy
I wished I knew her from when I was in a nappy
She is so friendly and cheerful
That sometimes I grow quite fearful
That one day I may lose her.
Jessica is so cool and so fun
Her eyes shine like the sun
Her face is a real beauty
Her smile is a real cutie
And she is my best friend.
Jessica makes me feel nice and happy
I wished I knew her from when I was in a nappy
She is so friendly and cheerful
That sometimes I grow quite fearful
That one day I may lose her.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]the_hero wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=&#FF0063><b>Cookies! wrote: [/QUOTENAME]It means skillful, I believe.[/QUOTE]
ok thanks to your friend's words. Much appreciated :-)[/QUOTE]
No, poignant means "emotional" or "moving". Shhhhh! Please don't let anyone know I'm here 'cause I'm not coming back here anymore.
ok thanks to your friend's words. Much appreciated :-)[/QUOTE]
No, poignant means "emotional" or "moving". Shhhhh! Please don't let anyone know I'm here 'cause I'm not coming back here anymore.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Queen_Rox<h6>We Will Rock You</h6> wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]the_hero wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=&#FF0063><b>Cookies! wrote: [/QUOTENAME]It means skillful, I believe.[/QUOTE]
ok thanks to your friend's words. Much appreciated :-)[/QUOTE]
No, poignant means "emotional" or "moving". Shhhhh! Please don't let anyone know I'm here 'cause I'm not coming back here anymore.[/QUOTE]
Yes it does, good job, i wasnt paying attention to that...
WHY?! COME BACK QUEEN ROX!
ok thanks to your friend's words. Much appreciated :-)[/QUOTE]
No, poignant means "emotional" or "moving". Shhhhh! Please don't let anyone know I'm here 'cause I'm not coming back here anymore.[/QUOTE]
Yes it does, good job, i wasnt paying attention to that...
WHY?! COME BACK QUEEN ROX!
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]the_hero wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]DreaminQueen wrote: [/QUOTENAME]To the_hero.... you've got some phenominal writing skills my dear, keep them coming.
You're definatly one of the very talented writers on QZ, i hope you can make it big one day with them!
I'll post some more of mine...
[/QUOTE]
thank you... very appreciated.
Now this one, is meaning a lot to me and is very emotional.
I know not everyone will read it, which is fine, bu for the ones that will read it. Please tell me what you think of it as it will mean a lot to me.
This is about my grandfather that passed away last Friday.
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Passion
You always had a passion for games
But now you’ve lost the most important one
Always having problems with remembering names
Names of people who mourn now you’re gone
The believe in God above
That’s the message you’ve tried to carry on to us
Jesus Christ the bringer of love
Will watch over you now, loving and harmless
The passion for friends and family
The big smile on your face when everyone was together
The jokes you’ve made so sarcastic and playfully
And whenever something had to be fixed, you where there, it didn't matter
And of course the passion for life itself
You sure lived it to the fullest
All the problems you’ve crossed, you’ve left them on a shelf
Of all my friends you really were the coolest.
R.I.P.
[/QUOTE]
Thats fantastic....
Truly beautiful and yes, this ones poignant...
Its a great memorial for your grandfather.
You're definatly one of the very talented writers on QZ, i hope you can make it big one day with them!
I'll post some more of mine...
[/QUOTE]
thank you... very appreciated.
Now this one, is meaning a lot to me and is very emotional.
I know not everyone will read it, which is fine, bu for the ones that will read it. Please tell me what you think of it as it will mean a lot to me.
This is about my grandfather that passed away last Friday.
-------------------------------------------------
Passion
You always had a passion for games
But now you’ve lost the most important one
Always having problems with remembering names
Names of people who mourn now you’re gone
The believe in God above
That’s the message you’ve tried to carry on to us
Jesus Christ the bringer of love
Will watch over you now, loving and harmless
The passion for friends and family
The big smile on your face when everyone was together
The jokes you’ve made so sarcastic and playfully
And whenever something had to be fixed, you where there, it didn't matter
And of course the passion for life itself
You sure lived it to the fullest
All the problems you’ve crossed, you’ve left them on a shelf
Of all my friends you really were the coolest.
R.I.P.
[/QUOTE]
Thats fantastic....
Truly beautiful and yes, this ones poignant...
Its a great memorial for your grandfather.
**Leaves the forum without a word**
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]anusloose wrote: [/QUOTENAME]weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee [/QUOTE]
Are you trying to spam this site or something?
Are you trying to spam this site or something?
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]anusloose wrote: [/QUOTENAME]weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee [/QUOTE]
Very nice poem.
Very nice poem.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Sir Nathan The Cowboy wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]anusloose wrote: [/QUOTENAME]weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee [/QUOTE]
Very nice poem.[/QUOTE]
LMAO!!!!! xD
Very nice poem.[/QUOTE]
LMAO!!!!! xD
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]the_hero wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]DreaminQueen wrote: [/QUOTENAME]To the_hero.... you've got some phenominal writing skills my dear, keep them coming.
You're definatly one of the very talented writers on QZ, i hope you can make it big one day with them!
I'll post some more of mine...
[/QUOTE]
thank you... very appreciated.
Now this one, is meaning a lot to me and is very emotional.
I know not everyone will read it, which is fine, bu for the ones that will read it. Please tell me what you think of it as it will mean a lot to me.
This is about my grandfather that passed away last Friday.
-------------------------------------------------
Passion
You always had a passion for games
But now you’ve lost the most important one
Always having problems with remembering names
Names of people who mourn now you’re gone
The believe in God above
That’s the message you’ve tried to carry on to us
Jesus Christ the bringer of love
Will watch over you now, loving and harmless
The passion for friends and family
The big smile on your face when everyone was together
The jokes you’ve made so sarcastic and playfully
And whenever something had to be fixed, you where there, it didn't matter
And of course the passion for life itself
You sure lived it to the fullest
All the problems you’ve crossed, you’ve left them on a shelf
Of all my friends you really were the coolest.
R.I.P.
[/QUOTE]
the_hero, this poem about your grandfather is very touching and well written, it was beautiful. you've inspired me. I read and loved all your poems, hope to see more!!
You're definatly one of the very talented writers on QZ, i hope you can make it big one day with them!
I'll post some more of mine...
[/QUOTE]
thank you... very appreciated.
Now this one, is meaning a lot to me and is very emotional.
I know not everyone will read it, which is fine, bu for the ones that will read it. Please tell me what you think of it as it will mean a lot to me.
This is about my grandfather that passed away last Friday.
-------------------------------------------------
Passion
You always had a passion for games
But now you’ve lost the most important one
Always having problems with remembering names
Names of people who mourn now you’re gone
The believe in God above
That’s the message you’ve tried to carry on to us
Jesus Christ the bringer of love
Will watch over you now, loving and harmless
The passion for friends and family
The big smile on your face when everyone was together
The jokes you’ve made so sarcastic and playfully
And whenever something had to be fixed, you where there, it didn't matter
And of course the passion for life itself
You sure lived it to the fullest
All the problems you’ve crossed, you’ve left them on a shelf
Of all my friends you really were the coolest.
R.I.P.
[/QUOTE]
the_hero, this poem about your grandfather is very touching and well written, it was beautiful. you've inspired me. I read and loved all your poems, hope to see more!!
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Queen are the Champions wrote: the_hero, this poem about your grandfather is very touching and well written, it was beautiful. you've inspired me. I read and loved all your poems, hope to see more!![/QUOTE]
Do you have some of your own?? Short stories and anyother form of writing are included...
How about some of your favorite authors etc??
Thanks for the compliment btw.
Do you have some of your own?? Short stories and anyother form of writing are included...
How about some of your favorite authors etc??
Thanks for the compliment btw.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]DreaminQueen wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Queen are the Champions wrote: the_hero, this poem about your grandfather is very touching and well written, it was beautiful. you've inspired me. I read and loved all your poems, hope to see more!![/QUOTE]
Do you have some of your own?? Short stories and anyother form of writing are included...
How about some of your favorite authors etc??
Thanks for the compliment btw. [/QUOTE]
I'll see what i can dig up and summon the courage to post em. i've been looking through my old binders and such for something, so i'll get back to you on that:)
Do you have some of your own?? Short stories and anyother form of writing are included...
How about some of your favorite authors etc??
Thanks for the compliment btw. [/QUOTE]
I'll see what i can dig up and summon the courage to post em. i've been looking through my old binders and such for something, so i'll get back to you on that:)
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Queen are the Champions wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]DreaminQueen wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Queen are the Champions wrote: the_hero, this poem about your grandfather is very touching and well written, it was beautiful. you've inspired me. I read and loved all your poems, hope to see more!![/QUOTE]
Do you have some of your own?? Short stories and anyother form of writing are included...
How about some of your favorite authors etc??
Thanks for the compliment btw. [/QUOTE]
I'll see what i can dig up and summon the courage to post em. i've been looking through my old binders and such for something, so i'll get back to you on that:)[/QUOTE]
yay!! thanks! :-D
Do you have some of your own?? Short stories and anyother form of writing are included...
How about some of your favorite authors etc??
Thanks for the compliment btw. [/QUOTE]
I'll see what i can dig up and summon the courage to post em. i've been looking through my old binders and such for something, so i'll get back to you on that:)[/QUOTE]
yay!! thanks! :-D
-Not a Day-
You can't fit a month in a day
Though you'll lose it all
But you're looking for a gain
Love's a struggle no matter
What you say
Losing sleep and the lights on
Wandering down the road
Searching for something
YOu just can't find
Waiting for something thats long gone
You can't fit a month in a day
Though you'll lose it all
But you're looking for a gain
As your hearts torn
In every which way
Running circles in your mind
Playing the ghosts of memories
All the people and emotions
You won't leave behind
Time is an enemy
When you want to hold on
She said you can't fit it in
Just all at once
That sometimes you lose
Some times you win
Love, Live how you choose
You wont fit a month in a day
Though you'll lose it all
Praying for a gain
Loves a struggle, No matter
What you say
Yeah, no matter what you say,
Patience each day...
You can't fit a month in a day
Though you'll lose it all
But you're looking for a gain
Love's a struggle no matter
What you say
Losing sleep and the lights on
Wandering down the road
Searching for something
YOu just can't find
Waiting for something thats long gone
You can't fit a month in a day
Though you'll lose it all
But you're looking for a gain
As your hearts torn
In every which way
Running circles in your mind
Playing the ghosts of memories
All the people and emotions
You won't leave behind
Time is an enemy
When you want to hold on
She said you can't fit it in
Just all at once
That sometimes you lose
Some times you win
Love, Live how you choose
You wont fit a month in a day
Though you'll lose it all
Praying for a gain
Loves a struggle, No matter
What you say
Yeah, no matter what you say,
Patience each day...
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]the_hero wrote: [/QUOTENAME]That's a nice piece of work dreamingqueen. Any story behind it? :-)[/QUOTE]
thanks! :-) i try... not very successful usually... but thanks! :-D
well what kind of story do you see?
thanks! :-) i try... not very successful usually... but thanks! :-D
well what kind of story do you see?