[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]M a t i a s M a y<h6><i>The Rainmaker wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color="#FF00FF">its_a_hard_life wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Why the hell can't I right stuff like this... :-S[/QUOTE]
because you listen to nirvana[/QUOTE]
¬.¬
I listen to alot of other bands too you know... Anyways, I'm not bothered.
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The_Hero...
Honestly, i am truly speechless...
I bow down to your skills my friend... kudos, mucho kudos...
You know exactly how to get across your feelings in writing. Brillant. Are some of those songs?? J/W... obviously Lucy is, did u write any licks for it?? I definatly see some kinda "classic rock vibes" about your work... but perhaps its just me... did ya read about my story behind the one u asked me about NOT A DAY?? Hope i answered ure question...
And i'm glad you liked my depressing one QUEEN ARE THE CHAMPIONS... and yes, the deal was worth it... got any more? of anything??
I'm glad this things gotten some attention... if u guys know of anyone else round here that likes to write see if you can get em here!
Honestly, i am truly speechless...
I bow down to your skills my friend... kudos, mucho kudos...
You know exactly how to get across your feelings in writing. Brillant. Are some of those songs?? J/W... obviously Lucy is, did u write any licks for it?? I definatly see some kinda "classic rock vibes" about your work... but perhaps its just me... did ya read about my story behind the one u asked me about NOT A DAY?? Hope i answered ure question...
And i'm glad you liked my depressing one QUEEN ARE THE CHAMPIONS... and yes, the deal was worth it... got any more? of anything??
I'm glad this things gotten some attention... if u guys know of anyone else round here that likes to write see if you can get em here!
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]the_hero wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]DreaminQueen wrote: [/QUOTENAME]The_Hero...
Honestly, i am truly speechless...
I bow down to your skills my friend... kudos, mucho kudos...
You know exactly how to get across your feelings in writing. Brillant. Are some of those songs?? J/W... obviously Lucy is, did u write any licks for it?? I definatly see some kinda "classic rock vibes" about your work... but perhaps its just me... did ya read about my story behind the one u asked me about NOT A DAY?? Hope i answered ure question...
And i'm glad you liked my depressing one QUEEN ARE THE CHAMPIONS... and yes, the deal was worth it... got any more? of anything??
I'm glad this things gotten some attention... if u guys know of anyone else round here that likes to write see if you can get em here!
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I have a fan lol
well Lucy was meant to be this classic BB King blues track, just read the lyrics with the de de de dum dum de dum guitar riff.
I intentionally write them as lyrics, but can't convert them into songs.
I did my best with the beast, who originally had the black sabbath line in it (kinda comparable with Son and daughter).
The last thing I posted was my great question about life and what it should be like. I didn't write it in a song or poet form, didn't even want it to rhyhm, I just wanted to get sentences off my chest.. every part of a song, resembles a day of it's time to be completed.
Frightened was meant to be a rock song, it has been played once with an old band I had.. I didn't do vocals and played a very easy drum beat. the guitar parts were very 80s rock. (rainbow, whitesnake alike).
For any more details, just ask :-)[/QUOTE]
haha yup ya do! *chants* hero! hero! lol
The Lucy things sounds cool. I enjoy BB King... I should listen to him more, my dads got some of his stuff...
I could seen Frightened as a rock song...
And i like that lil thing you j/ had to get off your chest, it was thoughts that i think many people (myself included) can relate to having or experiencing...
And "every part of a song, resembles a day of it's time to be completed." reigns true. I cant sit down and force something out of nothing... its got to come naturally...
haha i like that one u wrote in 2 minutes... ive got one like that, cuz a "friend" of mine knew i wrote and i was complaining about math class, so she told me to write one about trapezoids (cuz my teacher put some trapezoid questions on a test and we never covered them in class), i did that in about a few min... so here it is...
--Trapezoids in my Dreams--
My minds as
Hollow
As the inside
Of a drawn trapezoid
When it comes to,
Math and formulas
Never Taught
Your tests i can't avoid
But its just one question i have...
How can you examine
Me on a subject
Yet to be explained???
These paralleograms
of Inconsistincy
Haunt me in my sleep,
Cause alls i see,
Are trapezoids in my dreams...
Honestly, i am truly speechless...
I bow down to your skills my friend... kudos, mucho kudos...
You know exactly how to get across your feelings in writing. Brillant. Are some of those songs?? J/W... obviously Lucy is, did u write any licks for it?? I definatly see some kinda "classic rock vibes" about your work... but perhaps its just me... did ya read about my story behind the one u asked me about NOT A DAY?? Hope i answered ure question...
And i'm glad you liked my depressing one QUEEN ARE THE CHAMPIONS... and yes, the deal was worth it... got any more? of anything??
I'm glad this things gotten some attention... if u guys know of anyone else round here that likes to write see if you can get em here!
[/QUOTE]
I have a fan lol
well Lucy was meant to be this classic BB King blues track, just read the lyrics with the de de de dum dum de dum guitar riff.
I intentionally write them as lyrics, but can't convert them into songs.
I did my best with the beast, who originally had the black sabbath line in it (kinda comparable with Son and daughter).
The last thing I posted was my great question about life and what it should be like. I didn't write it in a song or poet form, didn't even want it to rhyhm, I just wanted to get sentences off my chest.. every part of a song, resembles a day of it's time to be completed.
Frightened was meant to be a rock song, it has been played once with an old band I had.. I didn't do vocals and played a very easy drum beat. the guitar parts were very 80s rock. (rainbow, whitesnake alike).
For any more details, just ask :-)[/QUOTE]
haha yup ya do! *chants* hero! hero! lol
The Lucy things sounds cool. I enjoy BB King... I should listen to him more, my dads got some of his stuff...
I could seen Frightened as a rock song...
And i like that lil thing you j/ had to get off your chest, it was thoughts that i think many people (myself included) can relate to having or experiencing...
And "every part of a song, resembles a day of it's time to be completed." reigns true. I cant sit down and force something out of nothing... its got to come naturally...
haha i like that one u wrote in 2 minutes... ive got one like that, cuz a "friend" of mine knew i wrote and i was complaining about math class, so she told me to write one about trapezoids (cuz my teacher put some trapezoid questions on a test and we never covered them in class), i did that in about a few min... so here it is...
--Trapezoids in my Dreams--
My minds as
Hollow
As the inside
Of a drawn trapezoid
When it comes to,
Math and formulas
Never Taught
Your tests i can't avoid
But its just one question i have...
How can you examine
Me on a subject
Yet to be explained???
These paralleograms
of Inconsistincy
Haunt me in my sleep,
Cause alls i see,
Are trapezoids in my dreams...
DICK DICK DICK
CUNT CUNT CUNT
ASS ASS ASS
TITS TITS TITS
OMG
I'M A BARD
THE BARD OF THE UNSEEN
BWAHAHAHAH
CUNT CUNT CUNT
ASS ASS ASS
TITS TITS TITS
OMG
I'M A BARD
THE BARD OF THE UNSEEN
BWAHAHAHAH
ive written 2 novels and a short story. too long to post tho lol
since many do not know me, i thought i'd ease you all in with the words of another poet.
Excalibur
by David Brent
I froze your tears and made a dagger
And stabbed it in my cock forever
It stays there like Excalibur
Are you my Arthur?
Say you are
Take this cool, dark, steel-ed blade
Steal it
Sheath it in your lake
I'd drown with you to be together
Must you breathe?
Cos I need heaven
Excalibur
by David Brent
I froze your tears and made a dagger
And stabbed it in my cock forever
It stays there like Excalibur
Are you my Arthur?
Say you are
Take this cool, dark, steel-ed blade
Steal it
Sheath it in your lake
I'd drown with you to be together
Must you breathe?
Cos I need heaven
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]DreaminQueen wrote: [/QUOTENAME]The_Hero...
Honestly, i am truly speechless...
I bow down to your skills my friend... kudos, mucho kudos...
You know exactly how to get across your feelings in writing. Brillant. Are some of those songs?? J/W... obviously Lucy is, did u write any licks for it?? I definatly see some kinda "classic rock vibes" about your work... but perhaps its just me... did ya read about my story behind the one u asked me about NOT A DAY?? Hope i answered ure question...
And i'm glad you liked my depressing one QUEEN ARE THE CHAMPIONS... and yes, the deal was worth it... got any more? of anything??
I'm glad this things gotten some attention... if u guys know of anyone else round here that likes to write see if you can get em here!
[/QUOTE]
DreaminQueen, hmmm, i do have more...but will i post em??? :P
And the_hero, you are my hero! you have 2 fans here. I don't even know what to say about your work, everything was so good, i loved them all!!
Honestly, i am truly speechless...
I bow down to your skills my friend... kudos, mucho kudos...
You know exactly how to get across your feelings in writing. Brillant. Are some of those songs?? J/W... obviously Lucy is, did u write any licks for it?? I definatly see some kinda "classic rock vibes" about your work... but perhaps its just me... did ya read about my story behind the one u asked me about NOT A DAY?? Hope i answered ure question...
And i'm glad you liked my depressing one QUEEN ARE THE CHAMPIONS... and yes, the deal was worth it... got any more? of anything??
I'm glad this things gotten some attention... if u guys know of anyone else round here that likes to write see if you can get em here!
[/QUOTE]
DreaminQueen, hmmm, i do have more...but will i post em??? :P
And the_hero, you are my hero! you have 2 fans here. I don't even know what to say about your work, everything was so good, i loved them all!!
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Sparrow wrote: [/QUOTENAME]ive written 2 novels and a short story. too long to post tho lol[/QUOTE]
Could u post the Short story on a blog or something??? Id like to read it!
:-P
Could u post the Short story on a blog or something??? Id like to read it!
:-P
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Queen are the Champions wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]DreaminQueen wrote: [/QUOTENAME]The_Hero...
Honestly, i am truly speechless...
I bow down to your skills my friend... kudos, mucho kudos...
You know exactly how to get across your feelings in writing. Brillant. Are some of those songs?? J/W... obviously Lucy is, did u write any licks for it?? I definatly see some kinda "classic rock vibes" about your work... but perhaps its just me... did ya read about my story behind the one u asked me about NOT A DAY?? Hope i answered ure question...
And i'm glad you liked my depressing one QUEEN ARE THE CHAMPIONS... and yes, the deal was worth it... got any more? of anything??
I'm glad this things gotten some attention... if u guys know of anyone else round here that likes to write see if you can get em here!
[/QUOTE]
DreaminQueen, hmmm, i do have more...but will i post em??? :P
And the_hero, you are my hero! you have 2 fans here. I don't even know what to say about your work, everything was so good, i loved them all!![/QUOTE]
Aww, why must you tease me so??? :-P
lol hero's got his own mini fan club goin on here :-P
Honestly, i am truly speechless...
I bow down to your skills my friend... kudos, mucho kudos...
You know exactly how to get across your feelings in writing. Brillant. Are some of those songs?? J/W... obviously Lucy is, did u write any licks for it?? I definatly see some kinda "classic rock vibes" about your work... but perhaps its just me... did ya read about my story behind the one u asked me about NOT A DAY?? Hope i answered ure question...
And i'm glad you liked my depressing one QUEEN ARE THE CHAMPIONS... and yes, the deal was worth it... got any more? of anything??
I'm glad this things gotten some attention... if u guys know of anyone else round here that likes to write see if you can get em here!
[/QUOTE]
DreaminQueen, hmmm, i do have more...but will i post em??? :P
And the_hero, you are my hero! you have 2 fans here. I don't even know what to say about your work, everything was so good, i loved them all!![/QUOTE]
Aww, why must you tease me so??? :-P
lol hero's got his own mini fan club goin on here :-P
I was always getting praised for my stuff in primary school. I write a lot of stuff, but the trouble is most of it ends up in the bin because I'm never satisfied with anything I write.
Well I'm pleased to say that I'm working on something at the moment. I had a sudden flash of inspiration and the words are just flowing for me now. I'll post it when I finish it...
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=red>Quonkers wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I was always getting praised for my stuff in primary school. I write a lot of stuff, but the trouble is most of it ends up in the bin because I'm never satisfied with anything I write.[/QUOTE]
ditto! I had a poem published when i was in 5th grade, it was completely nonsensical and boring and i hated it! It had the worst rhyme scheme ever and made about as much sense as putting a circle in a square...Same with a short story i wrote in like 4th grade...
But i still dont like anything i write... Everything posted here, i love it when i write it, but as i was typing everyword in, i was cringing... going my god, what was i thinking?
Its crap!
But I'm looking forward to the things you've got planned!
ditto! I had a poem published when i was in 5th grade, it was completely nonsensical and boring and i hated it! It had the worst rhyme scheme ever and made about as much sense as putting a circle in a square...Same with a short story i wrote in like 4th grade...
But i still dont like anything i write... Everything posted here, i love it when i write it, but as i was typing everyword in, i was cringing... going my god, what was i thinking?
Its crap!
But I'm looking forward to the things you've got planned!
ok, now this something I wrote, seriously.
I was for my girlfriend, a lot of months ago.
I gave her a song as a present, and this are the lyrics
she said she loved it, and a few days later she left me
I guess she didn't really like it
xDDDD
It's the most gay stupid awful stinky love song ever
I'm a motherfucker. Yes, you can make fun of me
ok
so...
I would give you a thousand stars
and the moon, sky and mountains
I'd do anything you want
and maybe you'll realize
it's really worth the price
if I give all my life
to make you smile
I would give you all I have
and I don't need no reason
and maybe that is not enough
because you just can't see
you're everything to me
and till the day I die
you'll always be
Stay by my side
and I'd do anything for you
just to make you see
what you mean to me
In the middle of the night
while the stars are shining brightly
and the clouds had dissapear
just for you and I
I couldn't ask for more
if you are by my side
for evermore
I will hold you in my arms
and tell you how much I love you
you just look into my eyes
you'll see it's not a lie
that I love you more than my life
but please believe me now
I love you so
Stay by my side
and I'd do anything for you
just to make you see
what you mean to me
I was for my girlfriend, a lot of months ago.
I gave her a song as a present, and this are the lyrics
she said she loved it, and a few days later she left me
I guess she didn't really like it
xDDDD
It's the most gay stupid awful stinky love song ever
I'm a motherfucker. Yes, you can make fun of me
ok
so...
I would give you a thousand stars
and the moon, sky and mountains
I'd do anything you want
and maybe you'll realize
it's really worth the price
if I give all my life
to make you smile
I would give you all I have
and I don't need no reason
and maybe that is not enough
because you just can't see
you're everything to me
and till the day I die
you'll always be
Stay by my side
and I'd do anything for you
just to make you see
what you mean to me
In the middle of the night
while the stars are shining brightly
and the clouds had dissapear
just for you and I
I couldn't ask for more
if you are by my side
for evermore
I will hold you in my arms
and tell you how much I love you
you just look into my eyes
you'll see it's not a lie
that I love you more than my life
but please believe me now
I love you so
Stay by my side
and I'd do anything for you
just to make you see
what you mean to me
^ Like you said before to me...
"IT SUCKS"
You promised you won't write another song ever... The enjoyment in seeing that happen... xD
All I know is I can't write songs/poems... JUST CAN'T.
Matias, that was brilliant as I keep saying, but your too stubborn to listen.
"IT SUCKS"
You promised you won't write another song ever... The enjoyment in seeing that happen... xD
All I know is I can't write songs/poems... JUST CAN'T.
Matias, that was brilliant as I keep saying, but your too stubborn to listen.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]M a t i a s M a y<h6><i>The Rainmaker wrote: [/QUOTENAME]I would give you a thousand stars
and the moon, sky and mountains
I'd do anything you want
and maybe you'll realize
it's really worth the price
if I give all my life
to make you smile
I would give you all I have
and I don't need no reason
and maybe that is not enough
because you just can't see
you're everything to me
and till the day I die
you'll always be
Stay by my side
and I'd do anything for you
just to make you see
what you mean to me
In the middle of the night
while the stars are shining brightly
and the clouds had dissapear
just for you and I
I couldn't ask for more
if you are by my side
for evermore
I will hold you in my arms
and tell you how much I love you
you just look into my eyes
you'll see it's not a lie
that I love you more than my life
but please believe me now
I love you so
Stay by my side
and I'd do anything for you
just to make you see
what you mean to me[/QUOTE]
Now that Matias, IS lovely!
I enjoyed it very much.
Heart-felt and true. I'm sorry it didnt work out for you. I see the love....
Bitches are cruel...
and the moon, sky and mountains
I'd do anything you want
and maybe you'll realize
it's really worth the price
if I give all my life
to make you smile
I would give you all I have
and I don't need no reason
and maybe that is not enough
because you just can't see
you're everything to me
and till the day I die
you'll always be
Stay by my side
and I'd do anything for you
just to make you see
what you mean to me
In the middle of the night
while the stars are shining brightly
and the clouds had dissapear
just for you and I
I couldn't ask for more
if you are by my side
for evermore
I will hold you in my arms
and tell you how much I love you
you just look into my eyes
you'll see it's not a lie
that I love you more than my life
but please believe me now
I love you so
Stay by my side
and I'd do anything for you
just to make you see
what you mean to me[/QUOTE]
Now that Matias, IS lovely!
I enjoyed it very much.
Heart-felt and true. I'm sorry it didnt work out for you. I see the love....
Bitches are cruel...