so.....what do you think?

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=dark red>WhiteQueen wrote: [/QUOTENAME]You came along and whisked me off my feet,
But you also took my heart and filled it with deceit.
You thought I was someone who you could mess around,
That I was only someone, who never stood out from the crowd.

I knew in the back of my mind that this was what you were,
But I didn’t want to know, that you truly didn’t care.
Instead I kept loving you more and more each day,
Trying to push my thoughts more and more away.

You came along and messed me around,
But I hit back by standing out from the crowd.
You never thought I could live without your affection,
And it just showed you, you were looking at your reflection.

I now know that I have the spirit to keep fighting,
As love can be great and fulfilling, but also extremely frightening.
I had to power to say no to you and your evil,
Which made me happy, as it was your upheaval.

I posted this on another site,but I thought Id share it with you guys and see what you guys thought.Maybe a few others can post there stuff too,enjoy =)[/QUOTE]


If you could take any queen song and replace it with those lyrics what song would it be???

Who Needs You! or Nevermore!

Oops, not my question.

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=>LadyMercury wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Who Needs You! or Nevermore!

Oops, not my question.[/QUOTE]

LOL, thats cool, I think nevermore would be good, maybe show must go on

hmm is that a good or bad thing?I never thought of it as lyrics,just a poem but people seem to think differ!does it work better as lyrics then a poem?

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=dark red>WhiteQueen wrote: [/QUOTENAME]hmm is that a good or bad thing?I never thought of it as lyrics,just a poem but people seem to think differ!does it work better as lyrics then a poem?[/QUOTE]

Leave it as a poem... there's no need for music or change it into lyric when you want to write and express feelings.

Nice poem.

very well done poem! congratulations!! ; D

I'm Jelouse

Everyone's life is a picture,
Painted by only one person,

Life itself.
The picture shows everything you're doing,

And everything you have done.
But sometimes, Life gets tired.

And doesn't want to paint a picture.
So, Life sends problems to stop you,

If you give up, your picture is finished.
If you keep going, so does your picture.

So the question is:
How soon do you want to see your picture?

Do you want to see it now?
When it could be so much more?

Or later, when there's so much more than before?
It's your choice,

I'll keep going.

Very deep. I love it!