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[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Valensian Sky Surveillance wrote: [/QUOTENAME]

you're just being humble

you know you can suck

but you just can't suck THIS much


xD[/QUOTE]

Hahaha... meh. I've had my moments, but they usually go hand in hand with alcohol!
You're sexy Donny. How long til you're legal? 4 years? I'll be waiting.
http://queenguy.50webs.com
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Bubbles the cannibal bunny wrote: [/QUOTENAME]You're sexy Donny. How long til you're legal? 4 years? I'll be waiting.[/QUOTE]
thats flattering but I am spoken for, by a female, I am straight.
Taking some valuable time out of my search for the perfect fishnet tights...

You really do need to learn about the set-up of a song... You know verse, chorus, et cetera ? If you have some, I can't tell. It's also a distracting how the guitar part never seems to change - it's very bare-bones.

Also, you get louder and quieter very suddenly - perhaps because of the mic or your own voice.

It also makes little difference that you say "motherfucker" because you half-mumble it and it seems like you're uncomfortable saying it (if you aren't, it sounds like it).


You can actually set up a decent "sound studio" with minimal equipment. Many people put them in a basement or garage since it's usually away from other people making noise, and is an enclosed space. I've got decent results out of a microphone I found in a box in my basement - it feels like it "loses" something, but that could just be the way I sound in my head (resonance) and the way I sound to everyone else.

Yes, you NEED training. Get some. There are some good web-sites if you can't get person-to-person lessons. I read as much as I could find about the voice and vocal registers on-line and learned a LOT about how the voice works and simple technique (and what can kill your voice).

As a funfact : Mick Jagger says good things about vocal training. He didn't have any in the begginning, but he's actually doing some now.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=red>The Audacity of Charles wrote: [/QUOTENAME]
It also makes little difference that you say "motherfucker" because you half-mumble it and it seems like you're uncomfortable saying it (if you aren't, it sounds like it).[/QUOTE]
I live in a full house, didn't want anyone to hear me, felt good to insult dear old Jack tho.
Change it back again.

fatty.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]fatty wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Change it back again.

fatty.[/QUOTE]
I wish I could, but I wouldn't be able to pull off Someday One Day quite the same way.
Thinking about the differences between Sing a Lullaby and Blame Game, SAL seems to show what I was like when I first discovered Queen. Blame Game was written when I had not heard anything new in a long time. My voice had a light, almost falsetto feel on SAL. If I did the falsetto with say, Angel, I might sound more desirable.
I think your guitar sounds unbelievably out of tune...! I'm not saying this to be spiteful, but I agree with the majority of what was said in this thread. I honestly believe in hearing a song all the way, because I understand some songs have bad beginnings. But your bad beginning droned on 'till the end of the song. O_O

But then it ended and "Hat" came on and I was happy again. However, if this is truly your passion, I encourage you to carry on, and I applaud you for taking this all in stride. Just please get some lessons.
-Things Have Changed For Me-
I have a new song up.

this song is downloadable, and a capella, this is a challenge to the Queenzone community, I want to see what people think the instrumental track for this song should sound like. its a contest, winner gets their interpretation of the song used. no copyrighted material please.

what you have to have to enter the contest
1. sheet music of your version of the song
2. if possible, an mp3 file mixing my vocal with your insrutmental
3. if 2 is not possible for you, just a recording of your instrumental
4. your own name, I have to know who to give credit

The song is "Mary Austin" btw

by entering this competion, you affirm that I can use your creation for my own musical work, however I see fit, yet whatever you add to the song remains your own intellectual property.

in idiots terms, you and me share the copyright to the song, I own the lyrics, you own the insturmental, and we both have the right to perform it whenever we want.
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Donny Mars wrote: [/QUOTENAME]Thinking about the differences between Sing a Lullaby and Blame Game, SAL seems to show what I was like when I first discovered Queen. Blame Game was written when I had not heard anything new in a long time. My voice had a light, almost falsetto feel on SAL. If I did the falsetto with say, Angel, I might sound more desirable.[/QUOTE]

dear boy,you could get cosmetic surgery done and change your name to george clooney if you want to,but unless you get some tuition you will never be 'desirable' as a 'musician'.
isnt innuendo an italian suppository? im gonna ride the wild wind! its_a_hard_life wrote:you nutcase you rule! joxer replies: but in a nice way :-]
[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=red>The Audacity of Charles wrote: [/QUOTENAME]XD

http://www.filefreak.com/pfiles/5975/instruments.mp3

(The "extra space" is cut out, so it doesn't match the song exactly, but I didn't think it needed to)

And, thank you Pomponias / Carol / Changer-of-Names ! :D[/QUOTE]
well then, I do declare that you crossed the line, I can not take your criticisms all that seriously anymore.