The Donny Mars Project (Penis Still at Large, jk)

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Donny Mars wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<font color=red>The Audacity of Charles wrote: [/QUOTENAME]XD

http://www.filefreak.com/pfiles/5975/instruments.mp3

(The "extra space" is cut out, so it doesn't match the song exactly, but I didn't think it needed to)

And, thank you Pomponias / Carol / Changer-of-Names ! :D[/QUOTE]
well then, I do declare that you crossed the line, I can not take your criticisms all that seriously anymore.[/QUOTE]

I do declare you had crossed the line for what my ears could even pretend to take seriously !

Also - YOU NEVER TOOK ANYONE'S ADVICE IN THE FIRST FUCKING PLACE.


I have told you, in all honesty what you can do to improve. But instead you act like you're God (or fucking God). Honestly - you really need to shape up before you can ask someone to enter a CONTEST to be your instrumentals.

Also - you must realise that Queen faced worse criticism - and THEY ACTUALLY DIDN'T SUCK THAT MUCH AT ALL.

GROW THICKER SKIN.

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n310/KelleyofLove/talkingwithgod.png

I don't like it at all. Honestly. It lacks talent. I'm sorry. :[

[QUOTE][QUOTENAME]<i>Donny Mars wrote: [/QUOTENAME][QUOTE][QUOTENAME]Bubbles the cannibal bunny wrote: [/QUOTENAME]You're sexy Donny. How long til you're legal? 4 years? I'll be waiting.[/QUOTE]
thats flattering but I am spoken for, by a female, I am straight.[/QUOTE]

Is your girlfriend as nasty as your music?

Pimping your username up with italics won't get you talent, honey. :P

DONNY mARSE YOU FUCKING SUCK!!


IF MY ASS HAD SOME KIND OF WEIRD INFECTION THAT COULD ALLOW IT TO TALK, IT WOULD WRITE BETTER SONGS

My ass does write songs, but it can't talk. To write the songs, it needs hands but if my ass could talk he could tell me the melody, the chords and the arrangements of the song.

And my ass would probably tell you to fucking go fuck yourself, you useless shit

okay, please don't take me seriously. I never intend to make it big in music, I would rather be so bad that I am good than So good that I a bad, I want people to think of me as comically bad at this point, I want to keep doing what I am good at, working on my stupid ass novel. the music is all in good fun, don't take me seriously without my trumpet, thats the only time i can really be serious about it all.

The only serious thing here is that you can't suck THAT much.


I'd shit on your chest

O, Hay-Zeus...

I remember when I was "writing a novel".

O, to be young again and self-deluded !

What a time, when all it took was arrogance to proclaim a brilliant rhyme. That my eighty pages of blithering shit was "a novel" - that my diary of shitty/angsty/sexually confused poetry was great.

I'm also very glad that I wasn't "on the Internet" in those days.


Then I stopped writing this post because, posthumously, I realised that you would never listen and that hopefully you would "grow up".

"Teenage" is a curable disease. Being stupid, on the other hand, can last a life-time.

What I meant to say before is that you have a good talent for lyrics and rhyming, and a good sense of humor. Combined with having the nerve to exhibit such unflinching silliness, I think you have a good future as an entertainer of some sort. Best of luck in your endeavors, young man.